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Talk about your daily activities.

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My name’s Viet Anh. I’m from Hanoi city. I’m 18 years old. Today, I wanna tell you about my daily activities. In the morning, I often get up at 6. 30 a. m. I brush my teeth, wash my face, and then I have breakfast. At 7. 15 a. m I go to the online class. I finish my study at 11h30. I have lunch at 12h30. I have 1 hour to take a nap. At 1. 30 pm, I study. I finish all my stuff at 16h30. After that, I often play badminton with my friends on the ground. I come back home and have dinner at 6: 00 p. m. After dinner, I often watch the news on TV for thirty minutes. Then I prepare for the new lessons and go to bed at 10: 30 p. m.
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up at 6. 30 a. m. I brush my teeth, wash my face, and then I have breakfast. At 7. 15 a. m I go to the online
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. I finish my study at 11h30. I have lunch at 12h30.
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have 1 hour to take a nap. At 1. 30 pm, I study. I finish all my stuff at 16h30. After that, I
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play badminton with my friends on the ground. I
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back home and have dinner at 6: 00 p. m. After dinner, I
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the news on TV for thirty minutes. Then I prepare for the new lessons and go to bed at 10: 30 p. m.
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IELTS speaking Talk about your daily activities.

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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