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Design Library for children

Design Library for children NlD0y
If I design a library for children, I would like to design a simple and close library with children. Firstly, I decided to choose the main blue pastel color for the library’s walls and choose a wooden floor because it makes the children who looks at the feeling of eye-catching, cool and eco- friendly. Secondly, the shelves is designed to suit the child's height. Especially it is colored according to each type of book to help you find it easily. Books are classified by reading level and displayed on shelves. Finally, the library is arranged in an open, friendly way. The library has enough space for students to participate in individual, pair and group activities. I choose bright color pictures, science posters or cartoons hangings on the walls. I would like use low wooden tables with colorful and they are have round shape as make the most of space, don’t hurt children and comfortable atmosphere for children to reading books.
If I design a library for
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children
, I would like to design a simple and close library with
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children
.
Firstly
, I decided to choose the main blue pastel color for the library’s walls and choose a wooden floor
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because
it
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makes
the
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children
who
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looks
at the feeling of eye-catching, cool and
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eco
- friendly.
Secondly
, the shelves
is designed
to suit the child's height.
Especially
it
is colored
according to each type of book to
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help
you find it
easily
. Books
are classified
by reading level and displayed on shelves.
Finally
, the library
is arranged
in an open, friendly way. The library has
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enough
space for students to participate in individual, pair and group activities. I choose bright color pictures, science posters or cartoons hangings on the walls. I would like
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use
low wooden tables with
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colorful and
they are
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have
round shape as
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make
the most of space, don’t hurt
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children
and comfortable atmosphere for
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children
to reading books.
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