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Write a paragraph to answer the Unit Question, “Is it better to save what you have or buy new things?”

Write a paragraph to answer the Unit Question, “Is it better to save what you have or buy new things? ” G9Yem
These days, people are divided into a topic: " Is it better to save what you have or buy new things? ”. I agree with the former because of the following reasons. First and foremost, human beings can save a lot of money. They have not bought new things for a long time, so they can save them. Another reason is that people can learn new skill through repairing their possessions. They learn how to fix their bicycle, their electronic fan, their chair or table and so on, so they do not waste them. The compelling excuse is that human protect their environment through saving what they have. In fact, many people are addicted to buy new things, so they are being harmful their surrounding. If people save what they have, they can contribute to the decrease in the trash quantities. I think that saving what people have is one of the best ways to preserve their environment. Last but not least, saving what people have can have effect on their mental health. In fact, several items bring people remind some special occasions. As the result, people can relive the happiest time of their life which makes them comfortable and relaxed. To sum up, human being should save what they have than buy new things due to above reasons. These days, people are divided into a topic: " Is it better to save what you have or buy new things? ”. I agree with the former because of the following reasons. First and foremost, human beings can save a lot of money. They have not bought new things for a long time, so they can save them. Another reason is that people can learn new skill through repairing their possessions. They learn how to fix their bicycle, their electronic fan, their chair or table and so on, so they do not waste them. The compelling excuse is that human protect their environment through saving what they have. In fact, many people are addicted to buy new things, so they are being harmful their surrounding. If people save what they have, they can contribute to the decrease in the trash quantities. I think that saving what people have is one of the best ways to preserve their environment. Last but not least, saving what people have can have effect on their mental health. In fact, several items bring people remind some special occasions. As the result, people can relive the happiest time of their life which makes them comfortable and relaxed. To sum up, human being should save what they have than buy new things due to above reasons.
These days,
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people
are divided
into a topic:
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"
Is it better to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what you have or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things? ”. I
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agree
with the former
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the following
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reasons
.
First
and foremost,
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human
beings can
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save
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
money. They have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
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new
things for a long
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time
,
so
they can
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save
them. Another
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reason
is that
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people
can
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learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
repairing their possessions. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
their bicycle, their electronic fan, their chair or table and
so
on,
so
they do not waste them. The compelling excuse is that
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human
protect their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saving
what they have. In
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fact
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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people
are addicted
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things,
so
they are being harmful their surrounding. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what they have, they can contribute to the decrease in the trash quantities. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
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saving
what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have is one of the best ways to preserve their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saving
what
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people
have can have effect on their mental health. In
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fact
, several items bring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
remind
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
special occasions. As the result,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can relive the happiest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of their life which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them comfortable and relaxed.
To sum up
,
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human
being should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what they have than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things due to above
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
. These days,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are divided
into a topic:
Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbol
"
Is it better to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what you have or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things? ”. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the former
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the following
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
.
First
and foremost,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
beings can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
money. They have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things for a long
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
so
they can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
them. Another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reason
is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
repairing their possessions. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
their bicycle, their electronic fan, their chair or table and
so
on,
so
they do not waste them. The compelling excuse is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
protect their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saving
what they have. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fact
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are addicted
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things,
so
they are being harmful their surrounding. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what they have, they can contribute to the decrease in the trash quantities. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saving
what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have is one of the best ways to preserve their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not least,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saving
what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have can have effect on their mental health. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fact
, several items bring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
remind
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
special occasions. As the result,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can relive the happiest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of their life which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them comfortable and relaxed.
To sum up
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
human
being should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
what they have than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
things due to above
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reasons
.
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IELTS speaking Write a paragraph to answer the Unit Question, “Is it better to save what you have or buy new things? ”

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
438 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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