Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Where you have received best service in your past ?

Where you have received best service in your past? alWMo
At first i want to state my opinion that hospitality is extremely imperative for every customers who are visiting regularly and who are the freshers. And as we can discern that the situation of covid makes us understand about helath and hygiene. So, the particular things to keep in mind is cleanliness in devoting services. Probing ahead, the service which i have received was the service at golden point restaurant that is in Mumbai. They really ought superior quality of food over there and also have experienced and well trained individuals working over there. To epitome: They provide safety kit like mask transparent shoes which cover our footwear. After going through the covid formalities like sanitizing and checking temperature. They merely asked us to enter the restaurant. Where i discered the staff were greeted us. First, they asked us for water and welcome us by juice. Elaborating, After done with welcome juice then they asked us pertaining to menu of their hotel. We merely gone through it and have ordered paneer barbeque, mushroom, veg garlic stick and appetizer for starter. Trust me it was as delicious as veg angara which i already have it previously. And the staff working there were exceptionally polite and welcoming. Next, we ordered dal makhni with jeera rice, chapati, pita bread with chole. Again the food was looking so mesmerizing and fruitfull. The tables were extremely looking neat and clean. And the fragrance i was getting was wonderful. I reckon i have not seen in other restsurant. The decoration with distinct king of colorful flowers and lights was stunning. Actually i was just looking at this all things in between i was enjoying my creamful dinner. Extending my views for further explanation, we have also asked for the chinese items and believe me the food they served was in golden glass bowl and well designed dish. I ordered tripal shezwan rice for my beloved mom because she is really crazy about chinese food. She love prominently much and i know after eating at golden point, she is going to come again for chinese food. Meanwhile, manger came to us and asked us regarding the taste of food and overall service which we got. He also asked us that everthing is ok or we are facing any difficulties with the service. He was so kind that he gave immense size of choclate to my little cousin. The restaurant was so tremendous and beautiful. Its divided in two parts. First is for only snacks items and second for buffets and many more things. At the end, we ordered desert like brownie with cookies cream and vanilla icecram with dark choclat. And it was again touched my heart. Sky-high service given by the staff of golden point restaurant. On the other side, poor customer service leads to nagative out come of organization. Therefore, dissatisfaction of one customer is entirely equall to 100 customers. There are enormous of things to make the customer happy. That are: 1) Greet the customers as they really like when someone welcome them. 2) Ask for feedback because they love to explain things pertaining to their experience. 3) Be loyal to clients it really make sense in the form of super honesty. 4) Say good bye to customer by shaking hands and telling them to visit again. These all things will escalate their value, popularity of organization and many more. To recapitulate, the service i received was excellent and i am surely impressed by their services. My family will definitely love to visit again. And we have recommended to our friends and family and others. Overall it was magnificent experience. I have also given best feedback to golden point restaurant.
At
first
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to state my opinion that hospitality is
extremely
imperative for every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "customer"?
customers
who are visiting
regularly
and who are the freshers. And as we can discern that the situation of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
us understand about
Possible spelling mistake found.
helath
and hygiene.
So
, the particular things to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in mind is cleanliness in devoting services.

Probing ahead, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have received was the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
golden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
that is
in Mumbai. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
ought superior quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
over there and
also
have experienced and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well trained
individuals working over there. To epitome: They provide safety kit like mask transparent shoes which cover our footwear. After going through the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
formalities like sanitizing and checking temperature. They
merely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
us to enter the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
.
“Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
i
Possible spelling mistake found.
discered
the staff
were greeted
us.
First
, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
us for water and welcome us by juice.

Elaborating, After done with welcome juice then they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
us pertaining to menu of their hotel. We
merely
gone through it and have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordered
Possible spelling mistake found.
paneer
Possible spelling mistake found.
barbeque
, mushroom, veg garlic stick and appetizer for starter. Trust me it was as delicious as veg
Possible spelling mistake found.
angara
which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
already have it previously. And the staff working there were
exceptionally
polite and welcoming.
Next
, we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordered
Possible spelling mistake found.
dal
Possible spelling mistake found.
makhni
with
Possible spelling mistake found.
jeera
rice, chapati, pita bread with
Possible spelling mistake found.
chole
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Again
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
was looking
so
mesmerizing and
Possible spelling mistake found.
fruitfull
. The tables were
extremely
looking neat and clean. And the fragrance
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was getting was wonderful. I reckon
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in other
Possible spelling mistake found.
restsurant
. The decoration with distinct king of colorful flowers and lights was stunning.
Actually
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
looking at this all things in between
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was enjoying my
Possible spelling mistake found.
creamful
dinner.

Extending my views for
further
explanation, we have
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
for the
Possible spelling mistake found.
chinese
items and believe me the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
they served was in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
golden
glass bowl and
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well designed
dish. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordered
Possible spelling mistake found.
tripal
Possible spelling mistake found.
shezwan
rice for my beloved mom
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
she is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
crazy about
Possible spelling mistake found.
chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. She
The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "loves", "loved".
love
prominently
much and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
know after eating at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
golden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
, she is going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
again
for
Possible spelling mistake found.
chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. Meanwhile, manger came to us and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
us regarding the taste of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and
overall
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
which we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
. He
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
asked
us that
Possible spelling mistake found.
everthing
is
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
ok or
we are facing any difficulties with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. He was
so
kind that he gave immense size of
Possible spelling mistake found.
choclate
to my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
cousin. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
was
so
tremendous and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
. Its divided in two parts.
First
is for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
snacks items and second for buffets and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more things. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ordered
Possibly confused word: Did you mean "dessert" (= a confectionery course that concludes a main meal) instead of 'desert' (= a barren area of landscape with little precipitation)?
desert
like brownie with cookies cream and vanilla
Possible spelling mistake found.
icecram
with dark
Possible spelling mistake found.
choclat
. And it was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
again
touched my heart. Sky-high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by the staff of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
golden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
restaurant.

On the other side, poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
leads to
Possible spelling mistake found.
nagative
out
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
of organization.
Therefore
, dissatisfaction of one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
is
entirely
Possible spelling mistake found.
equall
to 100
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers
. There are enormous of things to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
happy. That are: 1) Greet the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers
as they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
like when someone welcome them.

2)
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Ask for
feedback
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
things pertaining to their experience.

3) Be loyal to clients it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
Did you mean "makes"?
make
sense in the form of super honesty. 4) Say
This word is normally spelled as one.
good bye
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customer
by shaking hands and telling them to visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
again
. These all things will escalate their value, popularity of organization and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more.

To recapitulate, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
received was excellent and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am
surely
impressed by their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
. My family will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
again
. And we have recommended to our friends and family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
.
Overall
it was magnificent experience. I have
also
A determiner is probably missing here: "given the best".
given best
feedback to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
golden
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS speaking Where you have received best service in your past?

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
616 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts