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Describe your house you living

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The house I currently live in with my family is a two-story house in the suburbs of the city. This is not the ideal house I dream about but I like this atmosphere. It’s a fairly quiet place having pure air. In my house, I have seven rooms, one living room, one kitchen, two bathrooms, three-bedroom and a small garden at the back of the house. As soon as we enter the house, we can see the living room. My room is located between the living room and the kitchen. The 2nd floor has the altar, my parent's bedroom, and my brother's room. My favorite room in the house is my bedroom. It is small but it is beautiful. The walls are blue. My bed is next to my window. My table and desk are next to the door. In my bedroom, there is a clock and my wardrobe. I love my bedroom. Because It's like my own world, I can decorate it. I love my home because it’s a beautiful and peaceful landscape.
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in with my family is a two-story
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in the suburbs of the city. This is not the ideal
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I dream about
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I like this atmosphere. It’s a
fairly
quiet place having pure air. In my
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, I have seven
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, one living
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, one kitchen, two bathrooms, three-bedroom and a
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small
garden at the back of the
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. As
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soon
as we enter the
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, we can
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see
the living
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. My
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is located
between the living
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and the kitchen. The 2nd floor has the altar, my parent's
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, and my brother's room.

My favorite
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in the
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is my
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. It is
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small
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it is
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. The walls are blue. My bed is
next
to my window. My table and desk are
next
to the door. In my
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, there is a clock and my wardrobe. I
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love
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.
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world, I can decorate it. I
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my home
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and peaceful landscape.
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IELTS speaking Describe your house you living

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2 paragraphs
174 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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