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the life without the internet

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Now, I'd like to talk about my topic. My topic today is Talking about the life without the Internet. It cannot be denied that the Internet has been a big part of our life since it was invented, and many people find it impossible to live happily without it. The Internet appeared in 1974, Belgian scientist - Paul olet suggested connecting a phone to a TV screen to generate the same conclusion. And first appeared in the world in the US I often use the internet. With the situation of covid-19 epidemic, I use it more and more. I surf the internet every day and I often use it for many purposes: study, study online (especially in this pandemic situation the internet is very necessary), keep in touch with friends and relatives, entertainment (watch TikTok, watch movies, play games, shopping …) and community connection. The internet is a huge place, in fact more than 53% of people on the planet are actively using it. And without the Internet we will sleep better, socialize more and we will be more active. When it comes time to cook a delicious meal for the family, the family will gather right away, not "one phone per person". And there's no denying the benefits of the internet. It can take hours to go to the library to find documents, or all day to keep up with the news, or it can take time to connect
Now
, I'd like to talk about my topic. My topic
today
is Talking about the life without the Internet. It cannot
be denied
that the Internet has been a
big
part of our life since it
was invented
, and
many
people
find it impossible to
live
happily
without it. The Internet appeared in 1974, Belgian scientist
-
Paul olet
suggested connecting a phone to a TV screen to generate the same conclusion. And
first
appeared in the world in the US I
often
use
the internet. With the situation of
covid-19
epidemic, I
use
it more and more.

I surf the internet every day and I
often
use
it for
many
purposes: study, study online (
especially
in this pandemic situation the internet is
very
necessary),
keep
in touch with friends and relatives, entertainment (
watch
TikTok,
watch
movies, play games, shopping …) and community connection.

The internet is a huge place, in fact more than 53% of
people
on the planet are
actively
using it.

And without the Internet we will sleep better, socialize
more and
we will be more active. When it
comes
time to cook a delicious meal for the family, the family will gather
right
away, not
"
one phone per person
"
. And there's no denying the benefits of the internet. It can take hours to go to the library to find documents, or all day to
keep
up with the news, or it can take time to
connect
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IELTS speaking the life without the internet

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  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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