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Do you have the ability, the talent for comedy? Are you looking for a playground to express yourself? Comedy club is a place for you to show your passion and talents. Come to the club you will be able to make friends, experience interesting things together and develop your passion. Besides, you can also participate in official acting at performances with many attractive prize. The comedy club always welcomes you. Apply to become a member of the club Date November 12 to November 19 Time 7 a. m. to 10 p. m. Location at the club
Do you have the ability, the talent for comedy?

Are you looking for a playground to express yourself?

Comedy
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club
is a place for you to
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show
your passion and talents.
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to the
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club
you will be able to
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make
friends, experience interesting things together and develop your passion.
Besides
, you can
also
participate in official acting at performances with
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attractive prize. The comedy
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club
always welcomes you. Apply to become a member of the
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club


Date November 12 to November 19

Time 7 a. m. to 10 p. m.

Location at the
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6 paragraphs
95 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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