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you and your friends are talking about talent

you and your friends are talking about talent Jwjoe
SCRIPT TALK ABOUT TALENT (interesting conversation: linh tiên quang anh ) Tiên: Hello, have you been waiting long? Quang Anh: It’s okay. I just ordered drinks for all of us. Where is Linh? Tien: She told me she would be late. She's a bit busy Linh: Hi guys. Sorry for being late. I have work to do Tien: Are you sleep deprived? Because of school work? Linh: Oh no no no! I stayed up all night buying BTS concert tickets. I couldn't buy it on the website and had to go look for a pirated ticket. It's very hard because BTS's fans are too many Tien: Wait. Are you an Army? I'm Army too. I fell in love with JHope for 3 years Quang Anh: What? Why are you in the army? Who is Jhope? Another soldier? Linh: No. Army is just the name for the fan community of BTS. and we are ARMY. Quang Anh: I know about BTS. My girlfriend also likes the BTS member more than me. My friends in Vietnam say they look gay and often misrepresent their names. Their fans are all underage. Are they really that good? Tien: BTS is a global star. Each member has good personality and talent. They are currently the Presidential Envoy and awarded the cultural medal. Linh: They have meaningful songs and have a huge fan base all over the world. Live performances, the group has held concert tours around the world many times and set many records. Tien: I'm so disappointed that you have such a misconception about our idols Linh: Maybe you should change your mind about them? Think positive and be better Quang Anh: Sorry for the misunderstanding. You guy must be very sad because of my words. I'll pay for the apology today. Okay? Linh: It’s okay! Don’t need to do that. We’re friends. Quang Anh: Drinks are ready. Serving is preparing to bring out. Enjoy yourself!
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TALK ABOUT TALENT

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linh
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tiên
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quang
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anh
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Tiên
: Hello, have you been waiting long?

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Quang
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Anh
: It’s okay. I
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just
ordered drinks for all of us. Where is
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Linh
?

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Tien
: She
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told
me she would be late. She's a bit busy

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Linh
: Hi guys. Sorry for being late. I have work to do

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Tien
: Are you sleep deprived?
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Because
of school work?

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Linh
: Oh no no no! I stayed up all night buying BTS concert tickets. I couldn't
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buy
it on the website and had to go look for a pirated ticket. It's
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very
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hard
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because
BTS's fans are too
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many Tien
: Wait. Are you an
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Army
? I'm
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Army
too. I fell in
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love
with
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JHope
for 3 years

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Quang
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Anh
: What? Why are you in the
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army
? Who is
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Jhope
? Another soldier?

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Linh
: No.
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Army
is
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just
the name for the fan community of BTS.
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and
we are ARMY.

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Quang
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Anh
: I know about BTS. My girlfriend
also
likes the BTS member more than me. My friends in Vietnam say they look gay and
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often
misrepresent their names. Their fans are all underage. Are they
really
that
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good
?

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Tien
: BTS is a global star. Each member has
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good
personality and talent. They are
currently
the Presidential Envoy and awarded the cultural medal.

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Linh
: They have meaningful songs and have a huge fan base all over the world.
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Live
performances, the group has held concert tours around the world
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many
times and set
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many
records.

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Tien
: I'm
so
disappointed that you have such a misconception about our idols

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Linh
: Maybe you should
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change
your mind about them?
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Think
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positive
and be better

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Quang
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Anh
: Sorry for the misunderstanding. You guy
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must
be
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very
sad
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because
of my words. I'll pay for the apology
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today
. Okay?

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Linh
: It’s okay! Don’t need to do that. We’re friends.

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Quang
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Anh
: Drinks are ready. Serving is preparing to bring out. Enjoy yourself!
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322 words
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