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What can we do when we're waiting in line?

What can we do when we're waiting in line? YyG9j
What can we do when we're waiting in line? when you're waiting in line in order to pass the time and not think to your self that time is in passing at all, you could probably play games on your phone or just put in your earphones and listen to some music anything really can help that pass the time so you, so you don't realize how slow things are going. How can you manage your time better? I think we can manage our time better by organizing your day before hand. let's see your day for tomorrow you should recognize how it's gonna go. Instead of just freestyling it open you wake up in the morning. Because that way it causes a lot of disorganisation and chaos. What do you think of those who cut in line or jump the queue? I think people who cut the line first of all they do not know how long the person behind him has been waiting for and they simply just go in front of them without even asking or having any pity for the person so i find that as a very mean thing to do. How can companies improve their customer care? Companies can improve their customer care by listening to the customers 'cause first of all companies are’nt there to please anyone except for their customers so they should honestly put an effort in finding out what the customers like that way their products or services will be will please a customer even more than before because the customer's opinion is the most important one. But how do you think companies can improve customer service while waiting to prevent long queues? Can you repeat the question please? In relation to the long queues what do you think companies can do to improve customer service to prevent customers from waiting a long time? I think companies can let's say in the main waiting room where all the customers are they can maybe add like a television or also the speakers to play music so that the customers do not get bored and dissatisfied with the service that way they do not get angry with the company. Do you think the development of technology has reduced the time people spend waiting? yes, I think it is has really helped reduce the time because machines are more efficient than people and people need time to think while machines while they're programmed and they know what they're supposed to do they do it as fast as they can in a sufficient way they can unlike real people.
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when
you're
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in line in order to pass the
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and not
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think
to your self that
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is in passing at all, you could
probably
play games on your phone or
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put in your earphones and listen to
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some
music anything
really
can
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help
that pass the
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time
so
you,
so
you don't realize how slow things are going.

How can you manage your
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time
better?

I
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think
we can manage our
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time
better by organizing your day
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before hand
.
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let
's
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see
your day for tomorrow you should recognize how it's
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gonna
go.
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of
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just
freestyling it open you wake up in the morning.
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that way it causes
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a lot of
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disorganisation
and chaos.

What do you
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think
of those who
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cut
in line or jump the queue?

I
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think
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people
who
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cut
the line
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first of all
they do not know how
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long
the person behind him has been
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waiting
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for and
they
simply
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go in front of them without even asking or having any pity for the person
so
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i
find that as a
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mean thing to do.

How can
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companies
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improve
their
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customer
care?

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Companies
can
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improve
their
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customer
care by listening to the
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customers
'cause
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first of all
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companies
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are’nt
there to
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please
anyone
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except for
their
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customers
so
they should
honestly
put an effort in finding out what the
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customers
like that way their products or
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services
will be will
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please
a
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customer
even more than
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before
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because
the customer's opinion is the most
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important
one.

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how do you
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think
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companies
can
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improve
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customer
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service
while
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waiting
to
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prevent
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long
queues?

Can you repeat the question
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please
?

In relation to the
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queues what do you
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think
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companies
can do to
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improve
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customer
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service
to
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prevent
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customers
from
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a
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time?

I
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think
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companies
can
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let
's say in the main
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room where all the
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customers
are they can maybe
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add
like a television or
also
the speakers to play music
so
that the
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customers
do not
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get
bored and dissatisfied with the
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service
that way they do not
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angry with the
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company
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Do you
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think
the development of technology has
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reduced
the
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time
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people
spend waiting?

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yes
, I
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think
it is has
really
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helped
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reduce
the
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because
machines are more efficient than
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people
and
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people
need
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time
to
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think
while machines while they're
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programmed and
they know what they're supposed to do they do it as
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fast
as they can
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in a sufficient way
they can unlike real
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people
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IELTS speaking What can we do when we're waiting in line?

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