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talk about your close friend

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I have many friends, but my close friend is Hoa. She is my next-door neighbor. She is fifteen years old. She lives at 66 Tran Phu Street. She is a beautiful girl with a round face, big black eyes, and long straight black hair. I like her a lot because of her lovely smile. Furthermore, she is extremely friendly and sociable. So, it is easy to talk with her. Besides, she is an outgoing friend because she usually exchanges ideas with others. Also, she is so generous that she always shares school things such as paper, pens, pencils, . . . Especially, she is intelligent enough to help other classmates with homework. So, I'm very lucky to have such a good friend like her.
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IELTS speaking talk about your close friend

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124 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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