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3. Describe a short trip that you frequently make but dislike You should say: Where you travel from and to How often you make this trip Why you make this trip And explain why you dislike this trip.

3. Describe a short trip that you frequently make but dislike You should say: Where you travel from and to How often you make this trip Why you make this trip And explain why you dislike this trip. BYr39
- 3. Describe a short trip that you frequently make but dislike As far as i can remember when i was in grade 12, after completely finishing the first semester so that i want to blow off some steam/ let my hair down before sitting for the next semester. this is the reason why I and family decided to take a holiday of lifetime but unfortunately it didn't meet my family's expectation at all. We made a 2-day trip to visit Vung Tau beach which is a thriving tourist destination in VT city i can say that it is a tourist trap because it attracts a lot of people visiting there day by day. We decided to be on trip by coach from HCM city to VT city and it took us around 3 hours to get there. This was the third time I have visited VT, but this time was the worst experience in my life that i never forgot. bec when i got there i was totally taken aback by the hordes of tourists on the sand beach, i even could not see the beach any more just seeing people standing or laying on sand and no more room/spot for my family to sit down. It was such a awful trip because the reason i got there is hitting the town and refreshing my mind after a long semester or taking a lot of pictures to ingrain fond memories with my family but at that time i felt stressed and even uncomfortable because of the noise pollution of the crowd. It is the last time my f got there.
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a short
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dislike


As far as
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i
can remember when
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i
was in grade 12, after completely finishing the
first
semester
so
that
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i
want to blow off
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some
steam/
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let
my hair down
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before
sitting for the
next
semester.
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this
is the reason why I and family decided to take a holiday of lifetime
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unfortunately it didn't
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meet
my family's expectation at all. We made a 2-day
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trip
to visit
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Vung
Tau beach which is a thriving tourist destination in VT city
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i
can say that it is a tourist trap
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because
it attracts
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a lot of
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people
visiting there day by day. We decided to be on
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trip
by coach from
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HCM
city to VT city and it took us around 3 hours to
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get
there. This was the third
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time
I have visited VT,
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but
this
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time
was the worst experience in my life that
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i
never forgot.
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bec
when
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i
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there
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i
was
totally
taken aback by the hordes of tourists on the sand beach,
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i
even could not
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see
the beach
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any more
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just
seeing
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people
standing or laying on sand and no more room/spot for my family to sit down. It was such
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awful
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trip
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because
the reason
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i
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got
there is hitting the town and refreshing my mind after a long semester or taking
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a lot of
pictures to ingrain fond memories with my family
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but
at that
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time
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i
felt
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stressed
and even uncomfortable
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because
of the noise pollution of the crowd. It is the last
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time
my f
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got
there.
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IELTS speaking 3. Describe a short trip that you frequently make but dislike You should say: Where you travel from and to How often you make this trip Why you make this trip And explain why you dislike this trip.

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