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The main Idea of work created in several months. For achieving of that I research in various books, in categories of mythology sociology and Gnosticism. For creating a character, I draw and write the story, then create the story board. The technique of the work is swing and mixed media in fabrics and paintings in certain parts of costume and mask Then decoupaged 10 hours full time for created a location, performance and video Then I spend a month to edit the video beside the operator … in brief I hope you enjoy watching it.
The main
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of work created in several months. For achieving of that I research in various books, in categories of mythology sociology and Gnosticism.

For creating a character, I draw and write the story, then create the story board.

The technique of the work is swing and mixed media in fabrics and paintings in certain parts of costume and mask

Then decoupaged

10 hours full time for created a location, performance and video

Then I spend a month to edit the video beside the operator …
in brief
I hope you enjoy watching it.
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IELTS speaking Strengths of the work why it deserves the award

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4 paragraphs
95 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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