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The favorite story you have read or heard in your life .

The favorite story you have read or heard in your life. N8WN0

I remember that time when I read the first story in my life. It was an exciting story. It was talking about 'how to make your life better'. Every time I remember this story I feel the tears go down from my eyes. Because It was so emotional, then If I have power to change something in the story will be the end of it. Actually, It was a sad ending. I want to keep the Hero's life until the end but this is the way that the potter wants to end it.

I remember that time when I read the first
 story in my life. It was an exciting story.

It was talking about 'how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your life better'.

Every time I remember this story I feel the tears go down from my eyes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 It was so
 emotional, then If I have power to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 something in the story will be the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of it.

Actually
, It was a sad ending. I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the Hero's life until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this is the way that the potter wants to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 it. 