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Describe a time when you saw interesting on social mediaWhen it was? and Where you saw it?

Describe a time when you saw interesting on social mediaWhen it was? and Where you saw it? aVQW7
Introduction: I think social media has become a very important part of our life nowadays. Among the different social media platforms, I use Instagram the most. One of my favorite Instagram channels is 10-minute crafts. I find this channel very interesting, and I am always waiting for their new posts. The channel posts about different arts and crafts which people can learn in under 10 minutes. When it was? and Where you saw it? I first saw this channel a year ago, during the corona lockdown. I had a lot of free time and I wanted to utilize my time doing something productive. As I was scrolling through Instagram posts, I came across one of their posts. What you saw? In the post, they had taught about block painting. And explain why you think it was interesting? I am not good at painting but when I came across the painting technique, I felt even I could do it. It was very simple. I tried it and it came about really good. When my mother saw it, she decided to get it laminated and hanged it in the living room. I have been following the channel since then. Their channel has so many interesting posts about such projects. They show these really good-looking arts and crafts projects, which look like only professionals could have made. However, then they describe the simplest methods of making them below the project pictures. This is what makes their channel interesting to me. I think anyone can decorate their whole house, just by following their channel. And there is a different charm about decorating our house by objects we have made ourselves. Conclusion: I have recommended their channel to many of my friends and cousins. All of them feel that it is a gold mine.
Introduction:

I
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social media has become a
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very
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important
part of our life nowadays.

Among the
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different
social media platforms, I
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use
Instagram the most.

One of my favorite Instagram
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channels
is 10-minute crafts.

I find this
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channel
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very
interesting, and I am always waiting for their new posts.

The
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channel
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posts
about
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different
arts and crafts which
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people
can learn in under 10 minutes.

When it was?
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and
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it?

I
first
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this
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channel
a year ago, during the corona lockdown.

I had
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a lot of
free time and I wanted to utilize my time doing something productive.

As I was scrolling through Instagram
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posts
, I came across one of their posts.

What you
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saw
?

In the
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, they had taught about block painting.

And
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why you
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it was interesting?

I am not
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good
at painting
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when I came across the painting technique, I felt even I could do it.

It was
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very
simple.

I tried it and it came about
really
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good
.

When my mother
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saw
it, she decided to
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get
it laminated and hanged it in the living room.

I have been following the
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channel
since then.

Their
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channel
has
so
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many
interesting
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posts
about such projects.

They
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these
really
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-looking arts and crafts projects, which look like
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only
professionals could have made.

However
, then they
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describe
the simplest methods of making them below the project pictures.

This is what
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makes
their
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channel
interesting to me.

I
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think
anyone can decorate their whole
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house
,
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just
by following their channel.

And there is a
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different
charm about decorating our
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house
by objects we have made ourselves.

Conclusion:

I have recommended their
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channel
to
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many
of my friends and cousins.

All of them feel that it is a gold mine.
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IELTS speaking Describe a time when you saw interesting on social mediaWhen it was? and Where you saw it?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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