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My family is happy and amazing

My family is happy and amazing pXyym
I am from big family. there are five people in my family. I'm father's family. I live in Jeddah city with my family. I am 36 tears old. I am legal advisor, I worked at Baghlaf Al-Zafer holding company in Jeddah - KSA. My experience in legal advice and cases is fourteen years. My wife is a wife-house, she is 35 years old, she named Noha. I have one daughter and two sons. My daughter named Rovan, and she is 6 years old. My eldest son named Jasser, he is 5 years old. My smaller son named yousef, he is 6 months old. we have happy family.
I am from
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advisor, I worked at
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Baghlaf
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Al-Zafer
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KSA. My experience in legal advice and cases is fourteen years. My wife is a wife-
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Noha
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Rovan
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Jasser
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IELTS speaking My family is happy and amazing

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107 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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