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Describe a funny text message you have ever received. v.1

Describe a funny text message you have ever received. v. 1
Describe a funny text message you have ever received. Please say: what it was about who sent it to you when you received it and explain why you think this was a funny text message. Sample Answer 1: Though some people might disagree, I find the concept of sending and receiving text messages quite fascinating. I often send text messages to others and love receiving witty and humorous text messages from my friends. I got a very funny text messages from Rocky and it was one of the funniest text messages I’ve ever received.   This funny text message was about another friend who had a funny way of taking and dealing with others. Rocky was my best buddy during my university days and we still are quite good friends. We often try to meet each other even in our busy office schedules. He often sends me text messages and most of his messages have some kind of humour or a unique way of expressing something. The particular message I am talking about was sent by him and we were in our 7th terms in our university. As far as I recall I laughed for a few minutes after I read his SMS. This was funny yet thought-provoking SMS while it actually characterised another funny friend of ours. It described how the friend in question uses his money to earn respect and companionship from others. However, his trick does not work with us and this is something he has complained about to Rocky that days. On the evening Rocky sent me a text message which was more like a poem and it was quite a good one. I quite liked the rhyme and underlying meaning of the message and that’s why I still remember it quite well.
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text
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message
you have ever received.
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say: what it was about who
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it to you when you received it and
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explain
why you
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this was a
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message
. Sample Answer 1:

Though
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people
might disagree, I find the concept of sending and receiving
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messages
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quite
fascinating. I
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send
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to others and
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receiving witty and humorous
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text
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messages
from my
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friends
. I
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a
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funny
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from
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Rocky
and it was one of the funniest
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I’ve ever received.
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was about another
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friend
who had a
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way of taking and dealing with others.
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Rocky
was my best buddy during my university
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days and
we
still
are
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friends
. We
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try to
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each
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other
even in our busy office schedules. He
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often
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sends
me
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messages
and most of his
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messages
have
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some
kind of
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humour
or a unique way of expressing something. The particular
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message
I am talking about was
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sent
by
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him and
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funny
yet
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-provoking SMS while it
actually
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characterised
another
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friend
of ours. It
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described
how the
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in question
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uses
his money to earn respect and companionship from others.
However
, his trick does not work with us and this is something he has complained about to
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Rocky
that days.
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On the evening
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Rocky
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sent
me a
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text
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message
which was more like a poem and it was
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quite
a
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one. I
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liked the rhyme and underlying meaning of the
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message
and that’s why I
still
remember it
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quite
well
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
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IELTS speaking Describe a funny text message you have ever received. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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