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Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfect. v.1

Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfect. v. 1
Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfect. Please say: where you were on this day what the weather was like on this day what you did during the day and explain why you thought the weather was perfect on this day. Sample Answer 1: Days before the winter are perfect, I think, for travelling across the beaches in Florida. The days remain sunny and clouds float on the air with a light shape. In such a day, I went to Clearwater Beach on last month and had some wonderful moments. The Clearwater Beach is located on the west central coast of Florida and the entire area is divided into several parts- residential and resorts. The locality is famous for its white sandy beaches. The beach is around four kilometres in length. Different water vehicles and ships always occupy the harbour. Besides, there are some restaurants available to cater the needs of travellers in the locality. Usually, a large flock of the visitors get engaged with the leisure activities like jet ski driving, travel on boats, parasailing, golfing, fishing etc. on the beach. In such days, the beach area remains crowded by thousands of local and foreign tourists. The beach is considered as one of the best beaches in the USA and the resorts also famous for their world-class service. Besides, the weather was sunny and clear. Right before the winter, there are some changes in the weather pattern. But fortunately, there were little such changes found and thus I planned for the trip. Actually, I had long been planning that I will rise early in morning and pass an entire day at the Clearwater Beach in such a sunny weather. But hardly I could manage time then for my classes and exams. Since my exams were over, I was a bit relaxed and made the day out for me, alone. If the weather was cloudy, I could not have done the trip to Clearwater Beach. I think I had to wait for some other day to make it happen. After breakfast on the day, my first destination was to reach the beach on foot (this was a 15-minute walk from my home in Florida). Earlier I had lost my shoes and decided to move now on barefoot. Arriving at the beach, I selected a place to make my camp with the umbrella. I walked for around half an hour on the beach. The sands were wet by waves and I felt no heat reflected from them. I took a boat tour for the next one hour. Visiting the Clearwater marine aquarium was another great experience for me. Though I visited the place with dad, it was my first solo visit. I planned to have a ride on the waterski but discarded the idea due to the unusual waiting line. Just before the noon, I swam on the beach for half an hour. In fact, I played with some kids on water than swimming. Usually, the Florida weather is almost unpredictable. Though it rains heavily in October for the subtropical climatic condition, fall makes late to appear and summer does the same. In such conditions, the weather remains sunny only for few days. I took the chance and made my day. The day started with a bright sun and fortunately, I had no important tasks to complete. The college is closed for three days and it was more convenient for me to go out. Considering all the aspects, I thought the weather was perfect for going to the beach. At the end of the day, I really enjoyed the perfect weather.
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thought
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say: where you were on this day what the
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was like on this day what you did during the day and
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explain
why you
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the
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on this day. Sample Answer 1:

Days
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before
the winter are
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perfect
, I
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think
, for travelling across the
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beaches
in Florida. The days remain
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sunny
and clouds float on the air with a light shape. In such a day, I went to Clearwater
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Beach
on last month and had
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some
wonderful moments.

The Clearwater
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Beach
is located
on the west central coast of Florida and the entire area
is divided
into several parts- residential and resorts. The locality is
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famous
for its white sandy
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beaches
.
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The
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beach
is around four
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kilometres
in length.
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Different
water vehicles and ships always occupy the
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harbour
.
Besides
, there are
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some
restaurants available to cater the needs of
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travellers
in the locality.
Usually
, a large flock of the visitors
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get
engaged with the leisure activities like jet ski driving, travel on boats, parasailing, golfing, fishing etc. on the
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beach
. In such days, the
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beach
area remains crowded by thousands of local and foreign tourists.

The
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beach
is considered
as one of the best
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beaches
in the USA and the resorts
also
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famous
for their world-
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class
service.
Besides
, the
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weather
was
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sunny
and
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clear
.
Right
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before
the winter, there are
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some
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changes
in the
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weather
pattern.
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But
fortunately
, there were
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little
such
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changes
found and
thus
I planned for the trip.
Actually
, I had long been planning that I will rise early in morning and pass an entire day at the Clearwater
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Beach
in such a
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sunny
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weather
.
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But
hardly I could manage time then for my classes and exams. Since my exams were over, I was a bit relaxed and made the day out for me, alone. If the
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weather
was cloudy, I could not have done the trip to Clearwater
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Beach
. I
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think
I had to wait for
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some
other day to
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make
it happen.

After breakfast on the day, my
first
destination was to reach the
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beach
on foot (this was a 15-minute walk from my home in Florida). Earlier I had lost my shoes and decided to
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move
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now
on barefoot. Arriving at the
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beach
, I selected a place to
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make
my camp with the umbrella. I walked for around half an hour on the
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beach
. The sands were wet by waves and I felt no heat reflected from them. I took a boat tour for the
next
one hour. Visiting the Clearwater marine aquarium was another great experience for me. Though I visited the place with dad, it was my
first
solo visit. I planned to have a ride on the
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waterski
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but
discarded the
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idea
due to the unusual waiting line.
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Just
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before
the noon, I swam on the
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beach
for half an hour. In fact, I played with
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some
kids on water than swimming.

Usually
, the Florida
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weather
is almost unpredictable. Though it rains
heavily
in October for the subtropical climatic condition, fall
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makes
late to appear and summer does the same. In such conditions, the
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weather
remains
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sunny
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only
for few days. I took the chance and made my day. The day
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started
with a bright sun and
fortunately
, I had no
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important
tasks to complete. The college
is closed
for three days and it was more convenient for me to go out. Considering all the aspects, I
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thought
the
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weather
was
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perfect
for going to the
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beach
. At the
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end
of the day, I
really
enjoyed the
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perfect
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weather
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a day when you thought the weather was perfect. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
603 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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