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Describe a writer you would like to meet. v.1

Describe a writer you would like to meet. v. 1
Describe a writer you would like to meet. Please say: who the writer is what you know about this writer already what you would like to find out about him/her and explain why you would like to meet this writer. Sample Answer 1: Joanna Rowling, who is more popularly known as J. K. Rowling is the writer I would love to meet and spend some time with. She is a British Novelist and the creator of the world-famous Harry Potter Series. She was born on 31st July 1965 in Yale, England. Besides writing, she is also a screenwriter, film producer and researcher. She was employed as a researcher for Amnesty International when she conceived the idea for the Harry Potter while on a delay for the train in 1990. Her fantasy series books Harry Potter gained worldwide attention and sold over four hundred million copies. She also worked as a producer of the movie series Hary Potter. Besides writing for children, she also wrote 4 books for adult readers. Time magazine named her as a runner-up for the Person of the year in 2007 and she is now the 197the richest person in the UK whose fortune worth around 600 million Pound. Currently, she is the mother of 3 children and married to Neil Murray. What would I like to find out about her? Interesting question! But honestly speaking, I would  like to know about her daily life and interests -what she does, how she speaks with her fans, whether she cooks or not, what she does with her children and husband, what type of dresses she wear, what type of house she lives in and so on and on. I would also like to discuss her writing career, what's her plan on writing more fantasy books for children and what motivates her to write. Finally, I would like to know the types of books she likes to read and what special qualities an aspiring writer should have. She is my childhood hero and I have always wanted to meet her. Her books are quite special to me and helped me develop imagination. Sometimes her books inspired me to a great extent. I would like to know about the creator of Harry Potter and learn about her more. The way she had influenced millions of children all around the world is quite unmatched. I would like to spend some time with her and know more about his living legend.
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is what you
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about this
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writer
already what you would like to find out about him/her and
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explain
why you would like to
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this
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. Sample Answer 1:

Joanna Rowling, who is more
popularly
known as J. K. Rowling is the
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writer
I would
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love
to
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meet
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time with. She is a British Novelist and the creator of the world-
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Harry Potter Series.

She
was born
on 31st July 1965 in Yale, England.
Besides
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writing
, she is
also
a screenwriter, film producer and researcher. She
was employed
as a researcher for Amnesty International when she conceived the
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idea
for the Harry Potter while on a delay for the train in 1990. Her fantasy series
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books
Harry Potter gained worldwide attention and sold over four hundred million copies. She
also
worked as a producer of the movie series
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Hary
Potter.
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for
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, she
also
wrote 4
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for adult readers. Time magazine
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named her as a
runner-up for the Person of the year in
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2007 and
she is
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now
the 197the
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richest
person in the UK whose fortune worth around 600 million Pound.
Currently
, she is the mother of 3
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children
and married to Neil Murray.

What would I like to find out about her? Interesting question!
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honestly
speaking, I would
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like to
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know
about her daily life and interests -what she does, how she speaks with her fans, whether she cooks or not, what she does with her
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children
and husband, what type of dresses she
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wear
, what type of
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she
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lives
in and
so
on and on. I would
also
like to discuss her
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writing
career, what's her plan on
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writing
more fantasy
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books
for
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children
and what motivates her to write.
Finally
, I would like to
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know
the types of
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books
she likes to read and what special qualities an aspiring
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writer
should have.

She is my childhood hero and I have always wanted to
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meet
her. Her
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books
are quite special to me and
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helped
me develop imagination.
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Sometimes
her
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books
inspired me to a great extent. I would like to
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know
about the creator of Harry Potter and learn about her more. The way she had influenced millions of
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children
all around the world is quite unmatched. I would like to spend
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some
time with her and
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know
more about his living legend.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS speaking Describe a writer you would like to meet. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
409 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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