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Describe a fashion item you often use. v.1

Describe a fashion item you often use. v. 1
Describe a fashion item you often use. You should say: what it is how often you use it why you use it And explain how you feel about using it.   Model Answer 1: My wristwatch is a fashion item that I often use and this has become a very handy fashion item for me over time. This is a watch by Fast Track brand and I bought it last year. To me, this is a trendy fashion item and I love to wear it daily. Whenever I go out, I wear it. It has become a part of my dress-up and I rarely forget to wear this fashion item whenever I go out to work or university. For a long, I did not wear a watch but when I got myself admitted in the university, I felt the urge to buy one to maintain the tight schedule that I have in my university. I basically bought it for two reasons: to know the time and to wear it as a fashion item as I really liked the design of this watch. Now I use it as part of my casual or formal dress-up and to know the time whenever needed. I can compare the time when I was not in the habit of wearing a wrist watch with the time I start wearing it. I often had to ask others about the time and could not reach my classes due to my unawareness of the current time. Now I feel great about wearing it. It is a fashion item that I feel really good and trendy to wear as well as I can get updated always about the time. I can plan ahead and schedule my tasks as I am always aware of the time. Honestly, that has become an important part of my daily life.
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Describe
a
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fashion
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item
you
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often
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use
. You should say: what it is how
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often
you
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use
it why you
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use
it And
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explain
how you feel about using it.
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Model Answer 1:

My wristwatch is a
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fashion
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item
that I
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often
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use
and this has become a
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very
handy
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fashion
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item
for me over
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time
. This is a
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watch
by
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Fast
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Track
brand and I
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bought
it last year. To me, this is a trendy
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fashion
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item
and I
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love
to
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wear
it daily. Whenever I go out, I
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wear
it. It has become a part of my dress-up and I rarely forget to
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wear
this
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fashion
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item
whenever I go out to work or university. For a long, I did not
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wear
a
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watch
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but
when I
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got
myself admitted in the university, I felt the urge to
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buy
one to maintain the tight schedule that I have in my university. I
basically
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bought
it for two reasons: to know the
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time
and to
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wear
it as a
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fashion
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item
as I
really
liked the design of this
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watch
.
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Now
I
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use
it as part of my casual or formal dress-up and to know the
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time
whenever needed. I can compare the
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time
when I was not in the habit of wearing a wrist
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watch
with the
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time
I
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start
wearing it. I
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often
had to ask others about the
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time
and could not reach my classes due to my unawareness of the
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current
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time
.
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Now
I feel great about wearing it. It is a
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fashion
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item
that I feel
really
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good
and trendy to
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wear
as
well
as I can
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get
The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'updated'.
updated always
about the
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time
. I can plan ahead and schedule my tasks as I am always aware of the
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time
.
Honestly
, that has become an
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important
part of my daily life.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a fashion item you often use. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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