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Describe a food item that you often eat outside your home. v.1

Describe a food item that you often eat outside your home. v. 1
Describe a food item that you often eat outside your home. You should say: what is it how often you eat this food where it is available And explain why you often eat it outside your home. Model Answer: I often eat pizza in a fast food shop or in a food corner and I really like this food item.   Pizza is not made in our home and that’s why I eat it outside my home. Among the different shops and restaurants that offer pizza, I like Dominos Pizza most. They often bring variations on their pizzas and I find it convenient to go to a nearby Dominos Pizza shop and taste the pizza. I usually eat 3-4 pizzas in a month but of course it varies. In some weeks I mostly stay home and do not hang around with friends. In such weeks I do not eat any pizza. But sometimes friends throw parties and I hang around with them often and at that time I eat about 2 pizzas in a week. So on an average the number is 3-4 in a month. There are plenty of fast-food shops, restaurants and specialized pizza shops like Pizza Hut, Pizza Inn, Dominos Pizza, Yummy, Hot Pizza etc. that offer pizza. Since fast-food shops have grown hugely nowadays, I get it nearby my home, university and places I often go. I like the taste and variations of the pizza and they are convenient to find in a fast-food corner. Since it is not prepared at our home, I eat it outside. My friends also like this food item and while ordering a food item, most of us prefer the pizza. The prices are reasonable and it can be shared among friends. Because of my personal preference of pizza and the convenience of getting it, I often eat this food item outside home.   Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a food item you really like. Describe your most favourite food item. Describe a food you often eat in a restaurant. Describe your favourite restaurant. Describe an item you often eat with your friends. Describe a fast food item you like.
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food
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item
that you
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often
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eat
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outside
your home. You should say: what is it how
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often
you
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eat
this
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food
where it is available And
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explain
why you
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often
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eat
it
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outside
your home. Model Answer:

I
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often
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eat
pizza in a
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fast
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food
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shop
or in a
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food
corner and I
really
like this
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food
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item
.
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eat
it
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outside
my home. Among the
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different
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shops
and
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restaurants
that offer pizza, I like
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Dominos
Pizza most. They
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often
bring variations on their pizzas and I find it convenient to go to a nearby
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Dominos
Pizza
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shop
and taste the pizza. I
usually
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eat
3-4 pizzas in a month
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but
of course
it varies. In
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some
weeks I
mostly
stay home and do not hang around with
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friends
. In such weeks I do not
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eat
any pizza.
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sometimes
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friends
throw parties and I hang around with them
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often
and at that time I
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eat
about 2 pizzas in a week.
So
on an average the number is 3-4 in a month.

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plenty
of
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fast
-food
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shops
,
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restaurants
and specialized pizza
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shops
like Pizza Hut, Pizza Inn,
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Dominos
Pizza, Yummy, Hot Pizza etc. that offer pizza. Since
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fast
-food
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shops
have grown
hugely
nowadays, I
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get
it nearby my home, university and places I
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often
go. I like the taste and variations of the
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pizza and
they are convenient to find in a
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fast
-food corner. Since it is not prepared at our home, I
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eat
it
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outside
. My
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friends
also
like this
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food
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item
and while ordering a
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food
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item
, most of us prefer the pizza. The prices are reasonable and it can
be shared
among
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friends
.
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Because
of my personal preference of pizza and the convenience of getting it, I
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often
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eat
this
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food
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item
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outside
home.
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Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
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food
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item
you
really
like.
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Describe
your most
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favourite
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food
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item
.
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a
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food
you
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often
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eat
in a
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restaurant
.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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restaurant
.
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an
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item
you
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often
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eat
with your
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friends
.
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Describe
a
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fast
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food
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item
you like.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
70Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a food item that you often eat outside your home. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
377 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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