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Describe someone who is very brave. v.1

Describe someone who is very brave. v. 1
Describe someone who is very brave. You should say: who s/he is how you know him/ her what s/he does and explain why you think s/he is a brave person.   Model Answer 1: To me, my mother is the bravest person I have ever known and met. She was a fighter from her early teen age. She lost her parents when she was only 14 and after that, she had taken life as a challenge. Strangely, with her bravery and determination, she has established herself as a successful Doctor. She did an extraordinary job to be able to get admitted in the top-notch State-owned Medical College and achieved a promising result in her medical years. She is my mother and I know her even before I started my breathing in this world. I have been living with her for my whole life and she is very close to me. She is the person I consider as my role model. I admire her very much and I have never seen her compromise with rights and justice. By profession, she is a doctor and she is, in fact, a very renowned doctor in our locality. She is popular for her benevolent character and bravery. People often seek her advice when needed. She treats the poor people for free and even purchases medicine for them with her own money. Besides, she is a doting mother of 3 children and a loving wife of my father. It amazes me how she perfectly balances her professional and personal life. Her life was a challenge for her and she has faced almost all of the adversity the luck can through to someone. Facing these adversities and successfully overcoming them is a very challenging job. She has done that with bravery and intelligence. Sometimes facing a problem in life and making a good solution is even harder than facing a fierce wild animal and in this perspective, my mother has faced many demons and defeated them all. In her personal and professional life, she is a brave and exemplary character. I have seen her fight with politically powerful leaders to establish the right of a poor girl, mother or working class people. That requires gut and nerve and my mother has these all.   Sample Answer 2: Mr Simpson is a brave man indeed. I have witnessed his bravery during a fire related incident in the apartment building where we live in. In his personal life, he is honest and benevolent. But when it needs to be vigilant, he jumps into the acts and makes the things done which is not even imaginable to others. This is a great cue card for me and I will describe the matter here. Mr Simpson lives in my opposite apartment. He is now a government official. Being a jolly person, he loves to socialize. He is really a heroic person and his tasks of bravery are now legend. In his young days, he used to be a boxer and won several national and international awards. Since he is expert in unarmed combat and does not care for the troubles which are considered dangerous by the commoners. Mr Simpson is a government official and works in the foreign affairs section. Before getting engaged with the government job, he was an instructor for unarmed combat and ran a school to teach mixed martial art. But suddenly he changed his track and joined the government service. Now he seems happy with the job. But it should be admitted that he is a bold person on some grounds. In fact, I am one of the witnesses of his bravery. The way he rescued a little girl from a fire gutted apartment was adorable. He was the only man who risked his life to save the little girl. It shows how much courage a man needs to jump in a closed apartment to rescue a life. Based on the matters, I think Mr Simpson is a lionhearted person.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a person who you really admire. Describe a successful person you know about. Describe a person you think is brave. Describe someone you are very close with. Describe someone from your family.
Describe
someone
who
is
very
brave
. You should say:
who
s/he is how
you know
him/ her what s/he does and
explain
why you
think
s/he is a
brave
person
.
 
Model Answer 1:

To me, my
mother
is the bravest
person
I have ever known and met. She was a fighter from her early
teen age
. She lost her parents when she was
only
14 and after that, she had taken
life
as a challenge.
Strangely
, with her
bravery
and determination, she has established herself as a successful Doctor. She did an extraordinary
job
to be able to
get
admitted in the top-notch State-
owned
Medical College and achieved a promising result in her medical years. She is my
mother
and I know her even
before
I
started
my breathing in this world. I have been living with her for my whole
life and
she is
very
close to me. She is the
person
I consider as my role model. I admire her
very
much and I have never
seen
her compromise with rights and justice. By profession, she is a
doctor and
she is, in fact, a
very
renowned doctor in our locality. She is popular for her benevolent character and
bravery
.
People
often
seek her advice when needed. She treats the poor
people
for free and even
purchases
medicine for them with her
own
money.
Besides
, she is a doting
mother
of 3 children and a loving wife of my father. It amazes me how she
perfectly
balances her professional and personal
life
. Her
life
was a challenge for
her and
she has faced almost
all of the
adversity the luck can through to
someone
. Facing these adversities and
successfully
overcoming them is a
very
challenging
job
. She has done that with
bravery
and intelligence.
Sometimes
facing a problem in
life
and making a
good
solution is even harder than facing a fierce wild animal and in this perspective, my
mother
has faced
many
demons and defeated them all. In her personal and professional
life
, she is a
brave
and exemplary character. I have
seen
her fight with
politically
powerful leaders to establish the
right
of a poor girl,
mother
or working
class
people
. That requires gut and nerve and my
mother
has these all.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Mr Simpson is a
brave
man
indeed
. I have witnessed his
bravery
during a fire related incident in the
apartment
building where we
live
in. In his personal
life
, he is honest and benevolent.
But
when it needs to be vigilant, he jumps into the acts and
makes
the things done which is not even imaginable to others. This is a great
cue
card
for me and I will
describe
the matter here.

Mr Simpson
lives
in my opposite
apartment
. He is
now
a
government
official. Being a jolly
person
, he
loves
to socialize. He is
really
a heroic
person
and his tasks of
bravery
are
now
legend. In his young days, he
used
to be a boxer and won several national and international awards. Since he is expert in unarmed combat and does not care for the troubles which
are considered
dangerous
by the commoners.

Mr Simpson is a
government
official and works in the foreign affairs section.
Before
getting engaged with the
government
job
, he was an instructor for unarmed combat and ran a school to teach mixed martial art.
But
suddenly
he
changed
his
track
and
joined
the
government
service.
Now
he seems happy with the
job
.
But
it should
be admitted
that he is a bold
person
on
some
grounds. In fact, I am one of the witnesses of his
bravery
. The way he rescued a
little
girl from a fire gutted
apartment
was adorable. He was the
only
man
who
risked his
life
to save the
little
girl. It
shows
how much courage a
man
needs to jump in a closed
apartment
to rescue a
life
. Based on the matters, I
think
Mr Simpson is a lionhearted
person
.
 
Similar
Cue
Card
Topics Your ability to talk about this
Cue
Card
would enable you to talk about the following
Cue
Cards
as
well
:
Describe
a
person
who
you
really
admire.
Describe
a successful
person
you know
about.
Describe
a
person
you
think
is
brave
.
Describe
someone
you are
very
close with.
Describe
someone
from your family.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
71Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe someone who is very brave. v. 1

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  American English
5 paragraphs
722 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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