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Describe a common vehicle in your city that you often use. v.1

Describe a common vehicle in your city that you often use. v. 1
Describe a common vehicle in your city that you often use. You should say: What it is How often you use it How much it cost to travel in it And explain why you often use it. Model Answer 1: Underpass train is a common vehicle type in my city and I often use this transportation system. Though bus is the most common transportation system in my city, there are so many people who use the underpass trains to reach to their schools and workplaces. I use the trains almost 5-8 times a week to reach my workplace/ university. While returning home, I take the taxi as train schedule in the evening contradicts my schedule. The train is much cheaper than the public bus or taxi in my city. Since I do not own a car I need to rely on the public transportation systems and the train costs only a few dollars per week. Someone can have a train pass for the whole month only for 50 dollars and this would allow him/her to travel any places within the city as many time as he/she needed. The train station is in walking distance from my living place and that’s the primary reason I prefer this transportation to reach my university/ workplace. I do not have to wait for a long and usually I can get a moderate seat in it. There is no traffic jam to kill my time on the road and that’s another important reason for my preference for this train transportation system. Finally, I can save a great deal of money using the train over the taxi or other types of transportation systems. Because all of these facilities and advantages I often use this transportation system.       Sample Answer 2: Rickshaw (a three-wheeler vehicle, driven by a rickshaw puller) is a common vehicle in my city. The majority of the people use this vehicle to move to different places. They use this vehicle mostly to reach short distances. I am glad to have this special cue card for me and now will explain the matter in brief. I need to use this vehicle frequently. In fact, I am a college student and need to move for my college every morning. My college is not far away from my residence. So, I need to ride on a rickshaw to reach my college. Besides, I also take rides on this vehicle when I need to move inside the city and cannot manage to ride on public transports. Besides, the rickshaw is considered an environment-friendly transport as it does not emit any fumes. The cost of riding a hiring a rickshaw is moderate. The rent varies based on the distances. But the cost is more if I consider it with the fare of public transports. Usually, it takes around rupees 15/20 to reach a distance like about one or half a kilometre. But when it is long distance, the passenger needs to negotiate with the rickshaw puller. In most of the cases, they demand a higher fare than the usual if not negotiated. I use this vehicle often for some reasons. The most important thing about riding a rickshaw is it helps to sit comfortably and independently. Riding on public transports is really a troublesome matter. The number of seats is limited but the buses are overcrowded. Hence, it is inconvenient for females like me to struggle in the morning rush to grab a seat amid hundreds of other people. Moreover, riding a rickshaw also helps to reach the destination in due time as it directly starts for the destination after being hired. So, I often use rickshaw.
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Describe
a
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common
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vehicle
in your city that you
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often
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use
. You should say: What it is How
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often
you
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use
it How much it
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cost
to travel in it And
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explain
why you
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often
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use
it. Model Answer 1:

Underpass
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train
is a
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common
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vehicle
type in my city and I
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often
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use
this
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transportation
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system
. Though bus is the most
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common
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transportation
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system
in my city, there are
so
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many
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people
who
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use
the underpass
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trains
to
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reach
to their schools and workplaces. I
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use
the
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trains
almost 5-8
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times
a week to
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reach
my workplace/ university. While returning home, I take the taxi as
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train
schedule in the evening contradicts my schedule. The
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train
is much cheaper than the
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public
bus or taxi in my city. Since I do not
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own
a car I
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need
to rely on the
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public
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transportation
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systems
and the
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train
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costs
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only
a few dollars per week. Someone can have a
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train
pass for the whole month
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only
for 50 dollars and this would
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allow
him/her to travel any places within the city as
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many
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time
as he/she needed. The
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train
station is in walking
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distance
from my living place and that’s the primary reason I prefer this
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transportation
to
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reach
my university/ workplace. I do not
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have to
wait for a long and
usually
I can
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get
a moderate seat in it. There is no traffic jam to kill my
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time
on the road and that’s another
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important
reason for my preference for this
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train
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transportation
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system
.
Finally
, I can save a great deal of money using the
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train
over the taxi or other types of
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transportation
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systems
.
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Because
all of these facilities and advantages I
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often
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use
this
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transportation
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system
.
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Sample Answer
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2: Rickshaw
(a three-wheeler
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vehicle
, driven by a
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rickshaw
puller) is a
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common
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vehicle
in my city. The majority of the
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people
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use
this
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vehicle
to
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move
to
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different
places. They
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use
this
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vehicle
mostly
to
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reach
short
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distances
. I am glad to have this special cue card for me and
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now
will
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explain
the matter
in brief
.

I
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need
to
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use
this
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vehicle
frequently
. In fact, I am a college student and
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need
to
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move
for my college every morning. My college is not far away from my residence.
So
, I
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need
to ride on a
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rickshaw
to
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reach
my college.
Besides
, I
also
take rides on this
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vehicle
when I
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need
to
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move
inside the city and cannot manage to ride on
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public
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transports
.
Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Besides
, the
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rickshaw
is considered
an environment-friendly
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transport
as it does not emit any fumes.

The
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cost
of
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riding
a hiring a
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rickshaw
is moderate. The rent varies based on the
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distances
.
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But
the
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cost
is more if I consider it with the fare of
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public
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transports
.
Usually
, it takes around rupees 15/20 to
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reach
a
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distance
like about one or half a
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kilometre
.
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But
when it is long
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distance
, the passenger
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needs
to negotiate with the
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rickshaw
puller. In most of the cases, they demand a higher fare than the usual if not negotiated.

I
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use
this
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vehicle
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often
for
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some
reasons. The most
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important
thing about
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riding
a
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rickshaw
is it
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helps
to sit
comfortably
and
independently
.
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Riding
on
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public
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transports
is
really
a troublesome matter. The number of seats
is limited
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but
the buses
are overcrowded
.
Hence
, it is inconvenient for females like me to struggle in the morning rush to grab a seat amid hundreds of other
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people
.
Moreover
,
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riding
a
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rickshaw
also
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helps
to
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reach
the destination in due
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time
as it
directly
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starts
for the destination after
being hired
.
So
, I
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often
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use
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rickshaw
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
91Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a common vehicle in your city that you often use. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
611 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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