Describe a jewellery or cosmetic item you often use. You should say: what is it how often you use it when you use it and explain why you use it often. Model Answer 1:
I am not like many other girls who like to wear jewellery item almost always. In fact, I have only 2/3 jewellery items that I own and I do not always use all of them. The fashion bracelet made of gold and diamond is the only jewellery item that I often use. I use it almost every day except the days when I stay home or go out for swimming. I like the fine quality this bracelet has. The gold and diamond made bracelet that I have is a kind of fashion item to me because of its thick slick and beautiful design. I find it fashionable, handy and easy to wear. For all these reasons I use it often. This was a gift from my mother on my 22nd birthday and I was so glad to have it from my mother. At that time I noticed that it was the most expensive gift I have ever got and the design and my mum’s affection were both important to me. This was the first time I got somehow inspired and motivated to wear a jewellery item. I still use it pretty often because I admire it as a gift from my beloved mother and the item is still fashionable and beautiful to me.
Describe
a
jewellery
or cosmetic
item
you
often
use
. You should say: what is it how
often
you
use
it when you
use
it and
explain
why you
use
it
often
. Model Answer 1:
I am not like
many
other girls who like to wear
jewellery
item
almost
always
. In fact, I have
only
2/3
jewellery
items
that I
own
and I do not always
use
all of them. The fashion bracelet made of gold and diamond is the
only
jewellery
item
that I
often
use
. I
use
it almost every day except the days when I stay home or go out for swimming. I like the fine quality this bracelet has. The gold and diamond made bracelet that I have is a kind of fashion
item
to me
because
of its thick slick and
beautiful
design. I find it fashionable, handy and easy to wear. For all these reasons I
use
it
often
.
This was a gift from my mother on my 22nd
birthday and
I was
so
glad to have it from my mother. At that time I noticed that it was the most expensive gift I have ever
got
and the design and my mum’s affection were both
important
to me. This was the
first
time I
got
somehow inspired and motivated to wear a
jewellery
item
. I
still
use
it pretty
often
because
I admire it as a gift from my beloved mother and the
item
is
still
fashionable and
beautiful
to me.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes