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Describe a village or urban area you have visited. v.1

Describe a village or urban area you have visited. v. 1
Describe a village or urban area you have visited. You should say: where it is when & how you went there who live there And explain what you liked/disliked about this village or urban area.   Model Answer 1: Though I have been born and raised in a metropolitan city, I visited my grandfather’s house many times and that’s a beautiful village that I have ever seen. This village is in the north part of the country and falls under the …. (…Say a division or state or country name…). This village is situated beside the (…say a river name. . . ) and has more than 10 thousand inhabitants. I went there in my childhood with my parents and the latest visit was in the last January with my mother. This village is almost 125 kilometres away from the place we currently live in. First, we took a train to reach the station of the district/state/ country where my grandfather’s village is and from the station we took a taxi to reach the river port of our village. There we took a boat and finally we walked 1-2 kilometres to reach the village. My grandfather has passed away a few years back and my grandmother, 2 of my uncles 2 aunts and their children still live in this village. Apart from our family members, the farmers and workers who work for my uncles, live there. This, in my opinion, is the most beautiful village I have ever been to. My forefather lived there and my father spent his childhood and teenage there. So in terms of bonding, this is a very important place for me. My grandmother and some of the cousins are very fond of me and I mostly meet them in whenever I go there. So in terms of my relation to my origin and relatives, this is the village I admire most. Besides that, this is a very beautiful village that seems like a painting by a famous painter. The environment is calm and pollution free, the green fields, fresh air and hygienic foods offer a very attractive reason for being there. The flowing river, the forest, the simple lifestyle of residence and my of my relatives are the main things I love about this village. There are very few things that I dislike about this village and the village itself has nothing to do about it. Like the education facility and treatment facility of this village is very poor and primitive. That’s something bothers me a lot.   Sample Answer 2: My recent experience in a village area in Russia has amazed me. I had to visit Esso in Kamchatka for some research purposes. The village is around 6500 kilometres far away from Moscow and filled with wilderness. The indigenous people mostly live in this village and surrounding areas. This is a nice candidate task card and I am happy to have it. I will describe the village now. Recently I have completed my graduation from a local university in Russia and had to complete the research on indigenous people. As part of the research, I went there with some of my batch mates. Traveling to the place was really interesting. We used an aeroplane, boat, and local transportations to reach there. But I enjoyed the journey to and from Moscow. In fact, I have never travelled so far before. The majority of the people in the village are indigenous and belong to the groups of the Itelmens, the Evenks, and the Koryaks. They live in peace and harmony here. Besides, there are some other people who also live in line with the locals and mostly deal with the tourists. They help the tourists and assist in planning the tours around the areas. The indigenous people are also cooperative. They helped us in many ways and provided the required information for us that we used in our research. Honestly, I like the nature most. The way of living in the village was the other interesting thing for me. the exotic location, volcanoes, hot springs, rivers etc. everything was wonderful and charming indeed. Riding on the mountain was another adventurous task that I took part in. Even the foods were delicious as well. So, I liked the area much and planning to pay another visit there.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a place you often go to. Describe a naturally beautiful place. Describe a relative’s house you have visited. Describe a place where you went with your parents. Describe a place you like to visit.
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Describe
a
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village
or urban
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area
you have visited. You should say: where it is when
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&amp
; how you
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went
there who
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live
there And
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explain
what you liked/disliked about this
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village
or urban
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area
.
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Model Answer 1:

Though I have
been born
and raised in a metropolitan city, I visited my grandfather’s
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house
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many
times and that’s a
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beautiful
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village
that I have ever
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seen
. This
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village
is in the north part of the country and falls under the …. (…
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Say
a division or state or country name…). This
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village
is situated
beside the (…say a
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river
name.
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.
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.
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)
and has more than 10 thousand inhabitants. I
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went
there in my childhood with my parents and the latest
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visit
was in the last January with my mother. This
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village
is almost 125
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kilometres
away from the
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place
we
currently
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live
in.
First
, we
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took
a train to
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reach
the station of the district/state/ country where my grandfather’s
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village
is and from the station we
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took
a taxi to
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reach
the
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river
port of our
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village
. There we
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took
a boat and
finally
we walked 1-2
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kilometres
to
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reach
the
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village
. My grandfather has passed away a few years back and my grandmother, 2 of my uncles 2 aunts and their children
still
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live
in this
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village
. Apart from our family members, the farmers and workers who work for my uncles,
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live
there. This, in my opinion, is the most
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beautiful
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village
I have ever been to. My forefather
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lived
there and my father spent his childhood and teenage there.
So
in terms of bonding, this is a
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very
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important
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place
for me. My grandmother and
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some of the
cousins are
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very
fond of me and I
mostly
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meet
them in whenever I go there.
So
in terms of my relation to my origin and relatives, this is the
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village
I admire most.
Besides
that, this is a
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very
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beautiful
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village
that seems like a painting by a
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famous
painter. The environment is calm and pollution free, the green fields, fresh air and hygienic foods offer a
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very
attractive reason for being there. The flowing
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river
, the forest, the simple lifestyle of residence and my of my relatives are the main things I
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love
about this
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village
. There are
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very
few things that I dislike about this
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village
and the
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village
itself has nothing to do about it. Like the education facility and treatment facility of this
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village
is
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very
poor and primitive. That’s something bothers me a lot.
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Sample Answer 2:

My recent experience in a
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village
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area
in Russia has amazed me. I had to
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visit
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Esso
in Kamchatka for
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some
research purposes. The
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village
is around 6500
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kilometres
far away from Moscow and filled with wilderness. The
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indigenous
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people
mostly
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live
in this
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village
and surrounding
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areas
. This is a nice candidate task
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card and
I am happy to have it. I will
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describe
the
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village
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now
.

Recently I have completed my graduation from a local university in Russia and had to complete the research on
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indigenous
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people
. As part of the research, I
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went
there with
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some
of my batch mates. Traveling to the
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place
was
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really interesting
. We
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used
an
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aeroplane
, boat, and local transportations to
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reach
there.
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But
I enjoyed the journey to and from Moscow. In fact, I have never travelled
so
far
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before
.

The majority of the
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people
in the
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village
are
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indigenous
and belong to the groups of the
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Itelmens
, the
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Evenks
, and the
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Koryaks
. They
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live
in peace and harmony here.
Besides
, there are
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some
other
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people
who
also
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live
in line with the locals and
mostly
deal with the tourists. They
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help
the tourists and assist in planning the tours around the
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areas
. The
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indigenous
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people
are
also
cooperative. They
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helped
us in
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many
ways and provided the required information for us that we
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used
in our research.

Honestly
, I like the nature most. The way of living in the
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village
was the other interesting thing for me. the exotic location, volcanoes, hot springs,
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rivers
etc. everything was wonderful and charming
indeed
. Riding on the mountain was another adventurous task that I
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took
part in. Even the foods were delicious as
well
.
So
, I liked the
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area
much and planning to pay another
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visit
there.
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a
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you
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go to.
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a
naturally
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place
.
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a relative’s
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house
you have visited.
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Describe
a
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place
where you
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went
with your parents.
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Describe
a
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place
you like to
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visit
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
87Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a village or urban area you have visited. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
780 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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