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Describe an important export item in your country. v.1

Describe an important export item in your country. v. 1
Describe an important export item in your country. You should say: what it is how it is produced or manufactured who work to make it and explain why it is an important export item in your country. Model Answer 1: There are quite a few significant export items we have in our country which bring a large portion of our total foreign revenue and help up boost up our overall economy and among them I would like to talk about the tea we export to more than 20 countries. In our country, a vast area is used for growing tea plants and the quality we produce for war and packet tea is world class. This is, in fact, one of the top 5 gross foreign earning export items for us. The tea is mainly produced in the hill track and low area of the southern part of our country where we have a large number of farmers working on that. The weather, rain and land required for good tea productions are available in this part of the country and we have many industries there to collect and produce the finest tea. The tea gardens are owned by either individuals or government and they engage a large number of farmers to work on the tea gardens. After the tea leaves are ready to be collected, the farmers and other workers collect those leaves, clean it and then send it to the factories there those leaves are processed and after rigid quality assurances and strict guidance those are made ready to be packed. The tea industry is a vast area where lots of people in different sectors are involved including farmers, caretakers, factory workers, manufacturers, engineers, QA, food officers, packing workers, transportation and preserving workers. Besides these, the owners and their appointed officers and employees also work in this industry. Tea is one of the major foreign revenue earning sources for our country and we produce high-quality products. Around 2% of our total population is directly involved in this sector and this has created a huge job opportunity. Moreover, this industry is expanding year by year and we are getting more countries in our export list. In terms of a major production of our country, job opportunity, foreign revenue earning, tea is a very important export items for us.   Sample Answer 2: Paddy is one of the most special agricultural crops of my country and it is exported around the world. I would like to thank you for this topic. As I was saying, Paddy is processed and we get rice which is the staple food in many countries of the world. The preparation process of paddy is a bit complex. A land is needed where the seeds need to be planted. But the land must be plain and should come with irrigation facilities. Irrigation is one of the most important matters for growing paddy but excessive water may damage the plants as well. It takes around three to six months for harvesting the paddy based on the paddy types. Usually, farmers are responsible to grow paddy. They work day and night to grow the paddy. In fact, without their direct assistance, it is really impossible to grow the paddy. Planting the seeds is a difficult task. The farmers start planting the paddy early in the morning. The work hard throughout the day to take care of the paddy. Before planning the paddy, they also need to level the soil and use fertilizers to make the land fertile. And after planning the seedlings, they have to wait till the paddy becomes matured for harvesting. Paddy is an important export item for my country. We produce a huge amount of paddy and after meeting our local needs, we export the crop in the world market. Actually, my country is one of the leading countries for exporting paddy. We also have some other agricultural crops but they do not grow in plenty. We need to import them to meet our needs. But it would have been difficult for us if we did not have paddy to export. Thus, paddy has become a great source of revenue earning. And so, its importance is huge.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: 1. Describe a tree or plant grown in your country. 2. Describe an area of your country where lots of people are working. 3. Describe a major crop or production of your country. 4. Describe an industry in your country.
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an
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important
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export
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item
in your
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country
. You should say: what it is how it
is produced
or manufactured who
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work
to
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make
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explain
why it is an
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important
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export
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item
in your
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country
. Model Answer 1:

There are quite a few significant
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export
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items
we have in our
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country
which bring a large portion of our total
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foreign
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revenue
and
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help
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up boost up
our
overall
economy and among them I would like to talk about the
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tea
we
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export
to more than 20
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countries
. In our
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country
, a vast
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area
is
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used
for growing
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tea
plants and the quality we
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produce
for war and packet
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tea
is
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world
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class
. This is, in fact, one of the top 5 gross
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foreign
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earning
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export
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items
for us. The
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tea
is
mainly
produced in the hill
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track
and low
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area
of the southern part of our
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country
where we have
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a large number of
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farmers
working on that. The weather, rain and
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land
required for
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good
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tea
productions are available in this part of the
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country and
we have
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many
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industries
there to collect and
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produce
the finest
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tea
.
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The
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tea
gardens are
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owned
by either individuals or
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government and
they engage
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a large number of
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farmers
to
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work
on the
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tea
gardens. After the
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tea
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leaves
are ready to
be collected
, the
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farmers
and other
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workers
collect those
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leaves
, clean it and then
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send
it to the factories there those
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leaves
are processed
and after rigid quality assurances and strict guidance those
are made
ready to
be packed
. The
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tea
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industry
is a vast
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area
where lots of
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people
in
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different
sectors
are involved
including
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farmers
, caretakers, factory
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workers
, manufacturers, engineers, QA, food officers, packing
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workers
, transportation and preserving
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workers
.
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these, the owners and their appointed officers and employees
also
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work
in this
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industry
.
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Tea
is one of the major
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foreign
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revenue
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earning
sources for our
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country and
we
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produce
high-quality products. Around 2% of our total population is
directly
involved in this sector and this has created a huge job opportunity.
Moreover
, this
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industry
is expanding year by
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year and
we are getting more
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countries
in our
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export
list. In terms of a major production of our
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country
, job opportunity,
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foreign
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revenue
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earning
,
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tea
is a
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very
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important
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export
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items
for us.
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Sample Answer 2:

Paddy is one of the most special agricultural
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crops
of my
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country
and it
is exported
around the
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world
. I would like to thank you for this topic. As I was saying, Paddy is
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processed and
we
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get
rice which is the staple food in
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many
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countries
of the
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world
. The preparation process of paddy is a bit complex. A
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land
is needed
where the seeds
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need
to
be planted
.
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But
the
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land
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must
be plain and should
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come
with irrigation facilities. Irrigation is one of the most
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important
matters for growing paddy
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but
excessive water may damage the plants as
well
. It takes around three to six months for harvesting the paddy based on the paddy types.

Usually
,
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farmers
are responsible to
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grow
paddy. They
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work
day and night to
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grow
the paddy. In fact, without their direct assistance, it is
really
impossible to
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grow
the paddy. Planting the seeds is a difficult task. The
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farmers
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start
planting the paddy early in the morning. The
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work
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hard
throughout the day to take care of the paddy.
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Before
planning the paddy, they
also
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need
to level the soil and
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use
fertilizers to
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make
the
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land
fertile. And after planning the seedlings, they
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have to
wait till the paddy becomes matured for harvesting.

Paddy is an
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important
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export
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item
for my
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country
. We
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produce
a huge amount of paddy and after meeting our local
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needs
, we
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export
the
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crop
in the
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world
market.
Actually
, my
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country
is one of the leading
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countries
for exporting paddy. We
also
have
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some
other agricultural
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crops
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but
they do not
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grow
in
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plenty
. We
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need
to import them to
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meet
our
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needs
.
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But
it would have been difficult for us if we did not have paddy to
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export
.
Thus
, paddy has become a great source of
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revenue
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earning
. And
so
, its importance is huge.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:

1.
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Describe
a tree or plant grown in your
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country. 2
.
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Describe
an
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area
of your
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country
where lots of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are working.

3.
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Describe
a major
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crop
or production of your
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country. 4
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an
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industry
in your
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country
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
118Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an important export item in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
765 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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