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I come from Bac Ninh. As you know, Bac Ninh is a land with many beautiful features of traditional cultural capital, in which the typical lyrical Quan ho. beside Bac Ninh also attracts domestic and foreign tourists through its scenic spots, historical sites, and long-standing traditional craft villages. As the center of ancient Kinh Bac, Bac Ninh holds its own unique beauty in natural scenery as well as long-standing culture. If you have the opportunity to come to Bac Ninh, do not forget to visit the 6 most beautiful and famous tourist destinations here that Vinlove is trying to mention.
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