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you've recently decided to eat more healthily

you've recently decided to eat more healthily 6aD3K

Hi Emma, I know I haven’t written for a long time, but I have some interesting news for you. I recently decided I wanted to eat healthier. I found a video on the internet that made me decide to change my life. I ate a lot of unhealthy food and I had to realize it wasn’t good for my body. It was also very important for me to talk to a specialist, so I went to a dietitian who helped me a lot. He has put together a special diet for me. I have been eating a lot of vegetables and fruits in the last 2 months. I walk a lot in nature every day and go to sports at least twice a week. I think I’ve improved a lot lately. I feel so much better in my skin. From now on, I want to pay even more attention to eating even healthier. If you have any ideas about healthy eating I would gladly accept. See you soon, Bogi

Hi Emma,

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but
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some
 interesting news for you.

I recently decided I wanted to eat healthier. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 found a video on the internet that made me decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my life.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 ate a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
 of unhealthy food and I had to realize it wasn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for my body. It was also
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very
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important
 for me to talk to a specialist, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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helped
 me a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
. He has put together a special diet for me.

I have been eating a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
 of vegetables and fruits in the last 2 months. I walk a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
 in nature every day and go to sports at least twice a week. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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improved
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
 lately. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much better in my skin. From This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 on, I want to pay even more attention to eating even healthier.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you have any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 about healthy eating I would gladly
 accept.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
,

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