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You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you bought. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, – Provide the details of your purchase – Describe the problem that you have with it – Suggest what can be done about it.

You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you bought. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, – Provide the details of your purchase – Describe the problem that you have with it – Suggest what can be done about it. Vw7Y7
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a couple of things which are wrong with the item I purchased from your furniture store at no 3 Jame Street. Last week, November 7, 2021, I bought a detachable wardrobe from your company at the rate of #200, 000, and the payment was made through bank transfer. I will attach a copy of the receipt with this letter as an evidence of payment. However, when I received the wardrobe yesterday, I noticed that the size what significantly smaller than what I ordered for. As you nah recall, while I was making the order, I requested for a 72 by 24 size wardrobe with a chamber for shoes. Unfortunately, what I got delivery of was 50 by 24. Given that this may be an error from your sales department, therefore, I would suggest for the exact size which I placed order for be sent to me in lieu for the one I am in possession of. I am open to paying the transportation and other associated costs. I hope you would consider my suggestion, and I will be grateful if I could your response in relation to that at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, James Bridget.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about a couple of things which are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
with the item I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from your furniture store at no 3 Jame Street.

Last week, November 7, 2021, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a detachable wardrobe from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
at the rate of #200, 000, and the payment
was made
through bank transfer. I will attach a copy of the receipt with this letter as an evidence of payment.

However
, when I received the wardrobe yesterday, I noticed that the size what
significantly
smaller than what I ordered for. As you nah recall, while I was making the order, I requested for a 72 by 24 size wardrobe with a chamber for shoes. Unfortunately, what I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
delivery of was 50 by 24.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
that this may be an error from your sales department,
therefore
, I would suggest for the exact size which I placed order for be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to me in lieu for the one I am in possession of. I am open to paying the transportation and other associated costs.

I hope you would consider my suggestion, and I will be grateful if I could your response in relation to that at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

James Bridget.

IELTS letter You bought a piece of furniture from a store in another town recently. There is a problem with the item you bought. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, – Provide the details of your purchase – Describe the problem that you have with it – Suggest what can be done about it.

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