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You want to ask somebody help to solve some oroblem

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Dear sherzod shermatov I am writing to ask your help to settle education that is to say in elementary education in a school where l work. Now l am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in this years. I have got an experience mostly l teach elementary classes I am going to say some issues about it. There are not given several grammar rules and exercises for learn. And l suggest, l point out that it would have given some grammar and pronunciation examples. At the result, pupil would leart deeply. I hope you read my idea. Your sincerely Saodat joraboyeva
Dear
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sherzod
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shermatov


I am writing to ask your
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help
to settle education
that is
to say in

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elementary
education in a school where l work.
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Now
l am as a teacher. I have been a teacher for ten years in
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this years
. I have
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got
an experience
mostly
l teach elementary classes

I am going to say
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some
issues about it. There are not
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given
several grammar
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rules
and exercises for learn. And l suggest, l point out that it would have
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given
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some
grammar and pronunciation examples. At the result, pupil would
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leart
deeply
. I hope you read my
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idea
.

Your
sincerely


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Saodat
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joraboyeva

IELTS letter You want to ask somebody help to solve some oroblem

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  American English
3 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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