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EXPERIENCES THROUGH HOLIDAYS IN FOREIGN COUNTRY

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I am writing this letter to share with you the experiences that I got from my holiday trip. Last year, I had a trip to a foreign country "Singapore" with my family. This is the second time that we went on a foreign trip during our holidays. We have stayed there for a week and we got a lot of experiences, enjoyment, and pleasures. Ridiculously, I had encountered a funny moment on the very first day of the trip. The problem is that we took the wrong bus and got opposite our destination, my uncle's house. It was so far from my uncle's house. Then we took a taxi and costed more than expected. Even though the prices and living fees are expensive in Singapore, it is still worth visiting there because of its advanced technical things like robots, underwater aquariums, and man-made designated fountains, modernized environment, and obedience of citizens. Amazingly, almost all the citizens are obeying the rules that are stated by their government. Moreover, we could walk along the beach by viewing the beautiful scene of Singapore and we could also ride the sky trains throughout the beach. It can not be denied that Singapore is a country that can entertain most of its foreigners with its advanced technology. As you enjoy learning about modern technology, architectural buildings and enjoy visiting the beach, I would like you to visit there when you have holidays. Let me now sum up here.

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