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write an email invite your friend visit your house

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Dear: Sam Hi Sam, how are you? I am writing this email to invite you visit my apartment tomorrow evening. I live in Rose Town 79 Ngoc Hoi road, Hoang Mai district, nearly Nuoc Ngam bus stop. You have to bring a smart phone and your identify card. Please give me a ring before you get there because my building quite difficult to find direction. You can invite your friends or your family. Your sinceraly

Dear: Sam

Hi Sam, how are you? I am writing this email to invite you visit my apartment tomorrow evening. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Rose Town 79 Possible spelling mistake found.NGCNGONGOsNOC
Ngoc
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Hoi
 road, Possible spelling mistake found.HoeingHangHuangHongHo angHwang
Hoang
 Mai district, nearly
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Nuoc
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Ngam
 bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bring a smart phone and your identify card. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give me a ring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my building quite difficult to find direction. You can invite your friends or your family.

Your Possible spelling mistake found.sincerely
sinceraly

IELTS letter write an email invite your friend visit your house

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

74 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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