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You’ve read a book about a famous person. You’ve decided to share your impressions with a pen-friend. Write a letter to your English pen-friend in which you tell him/her • who the book is about and what this person is famous for • what area of activity you’d like to achieve success in and why • what personal characteristics one should have to succeed in life

You’ve read a book about a famous person. You’ve decided to share your impressions with a pen-friend. Write a letter to your English pen-friend in which you tell him/her • who the book is about and what this person is famous for • what area of activity you’d like to achieve success in and why • what personal characteristics one should have to succeed in life 56JNm
Hi Lily, Sorry for not writing for so long. Hope everything goes well for you. I’m writing to tell you about a book that I have read recently. It was a biography of Steve Jobs. In my point of view, this book is worth-reading because his success story really inspires. Moreover, it teaches moral life lessons on how to be a better person. Over and above that, it gives insight into his personal life, his genius, insensitive side. Furthermore, it shows how Steve Jobs goes about finding himself and how Apple is basically himself in a company. As for me, you need to be passionate, fearless and confident in what you are doing as no one can attain success without having these characteristics. Your job should be like a piece of cake for you. Steve Jobs was always full of passion when it came to growing Apple, and I guess everyone heard of this company at least once. I hope you really like this letter and it is informative for you. Write me back as soon as possible. Much love, Emily
Hi Lily,

Sorry for not writing for
so
long. Hope everything goes well for you.

I’m writing to
tell
you about a book that I have read recently. It was a biography of Steve
Jobs
. In my point of view, this book is worth-reading
because
his success story
really
inspires.
Moreover
, it teaches moral life lessons on how to be a better person. Over and above that, it gives insight into his personal life, his genius, insensitive side.
Furthermore
, it
shows
how Steve
Jobs
goes about finding himself and how Apple is
basically
himself in a
company
.

As for me, you need to be passionate, fearless and confident in what you are doing as no one can attain success without having these characteristics. Your
job
should be like a piece of cake for you. Steve
Jobs
was always full of passion when it came to growing Apple, and I guess everyone heard of this
company
at least once.

I hope you
really
like this letter and it is informative for you. Write me back as
soon
as possible.

Much
love
,

Emily
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IELTS letter You’ve read a book about a famous person. You’ve decided to share your impressions with a pen-friend. Write a letter to your English pen-friend in which you tell him/her • who the book is about and what this person is famous for • what area of activity you’d like to achieve success in and why • what personal characteristics one should have to succeed in life

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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