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You just saw the advertisement of a course in a newspaper and you are willing to attend the course.

You just saw the advertisement of a course in a newspaper and you are willing to attend the course. 2b2jM
Dear Sir or Madam, I saw your advertisement about courses in the newspaper "New York Times" published on May 20 and I am writing to enquire about your short courses. I want to study both computer programming and design and creative writing at the same time. Can I take both courses at once? Then can I get a certificate of completion that I have studied in both courses? When are your next courses? Are the courses every week in summer? I have no experience in these courses. Are the courses suitable for beginners? I would like to know what the courses cover. How much do short courses in computer programming and design and creative writing cost? Are meals included in the cost of courses? Finally, I would also to know if all the rooms include a private bathroom? I would be grateful if you could send me more information. I look forward to hearing from you. Youth faithfully, Ann Smith.
Dear Sir or Madam,

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in the newspaper
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published on May
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about your short courses.

I want to study both computer programming and design and creative writing at the same time. Can I take both
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courses
at once? Then can I
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get
a certificate of completion that I have studied in both
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courses
? When are your
next
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courses
? Are the
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courses
every week in summer? I have no experience in these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
. Are the
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courses
suitable for beginners? I would like to know what the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
cover. How much do short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
in computer programming and design and creative writing cost? Are meals included in the cost of courses?

Finally
, I would
also
to know if all the rooms include a private bathroom?

I would be grateful if you could
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send
me more information.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Youth
faithfully
,

Ann Smith.
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IELTS letter You just saw the advertisement of a course in a newspaper and you are willing to attend the course.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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