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Semi formal general ielts letter

Semi formal general ielts letter OVD5G
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I would like to discontinue my IELTS evening course which is taking place every weekday from 7. 30 PM to 9. 00 PM. I am doing this part-time course for 2 months now, moreover, I found it very useful to build my vocabulary and grammar. Let me explain my situation in detail, I am a full-time working IT professional, sometimes I would need to extend my working hours to complete the deadlines assigned to me. Furthermore, due to my tight schedule at work, I am not able to attend classes on a regular basis. Considering my work situation, I am not getting enough time to concentrate on the course as well. In addition to this, my work timings have been changed recently I need to join my work at 12 PM and leave by 9 PM in the evening, which is coinciding with my course timing as well. Due to my above reasons and situation, I express deep regret that I will not be able to continue the course at the moment and I would you to consider my request. However, I will restart my course once my work timings are stable. I look forward to hearing from you for your confirmation. Yours sincerely, Sunanda Dasari
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I would like to discontinue my IELTS evening
course
which is taking place every weekday from 7. 30 PM to 9. 00 PM. I am doing this part-time
course
for 2 months
now
,
moreover
, I found it
very
useful to build my vocabulary and grammar.

Let
me
explain
my situation in detail, I am a full-time working IT professional,
sometimes
I would need to extend my working hours to complete the deadlines assigned to me.
Furthermore
, due to my tight schedule at
work
, I am not able to attend classes on a regular basis.

Considering my
work
situation, I am not getting
enough
time to concentrate on the
course
as well
.
In addition
to this, my
work
timings have been
changed
recently I need to
join
my
work
at 12 PM and
leave
by 9
PM in the evening
, which is coinciding with my
course
timing
as well
.

Due to my above reasons and situation, I express deep regret that I will not be able to continue the
course
at the moment and I would you to consider my request.
However
, I will restart my
course
once my
work
timings are stable. I look forward to hearing from you for your confirmation.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sunanda
Dasari
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IELTS letter Semi formal general ielts letter

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
215 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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