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Dear Lance, I am writing this letter seeking your permission to move to Data engineering team.

Dear Lance, I am writing this letter seeking your permission to move to Data engineering team. qV9JX

Dear Lance, I am writing this letter seeking your permission to move to Data engineering team. As you know I have been working as a system administrator for the past 4 years, I don't see any interesting and challenging work in this domain. The influx of Work tickets reduced drastically over the period of 1 year, This ideal time I have invested in learning Artificial Intelligence which is my area of interest and got certified from udemy Online course provider. Recently I have heard there are openings in data engineering team for AI developer, I would like to apply Because I will fit in to this role and meet required job qualifications. I can assure I would definitely provide an add-on to this project and company with my passion and skills. I need your approval to relieve me from this team so I could join the project. I will take responsibility finding new resource who can replace me, Schedule time in knowledge transfer to carry on the work hassle free after I leave. Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Lokeshwari.

Dear Lance,

I am writing this letter seeking your permission to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to Data engineering team. As you know I have been working as a system administrator for the past 4 years, I don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 any interesting and challenging work in this domain. The influx of Work tickets This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
drastically
 over the period of 1 year, This ideal time I have invested in learning Artificial Intelligence which is my area of interest and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 certified from Possible spelling mistake found.Udemy
udemy
 Online course provider.

Recently I have heard there are openings in data engineering team for AI developer, I would like to apply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I will fit in to this role and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 required job qualifications. I can assure I would definitely provide an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
-on to this project and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with my passion and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
. I need your approval to relieve me from this team This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the project.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will take responsibility finding new resource who can replace me, Schedule time in knowledge transfer to carry on the work hassle free after I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
.

Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours Faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Lokeshwari
. 