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You’ve got a new job in Germany and want to improve your German. A friend of yours went to a language school last year also to study German. Write a letter to your friend asking them about their experience. In your letter • give your friend your news • ask them if they would recommend the schoe

You’ve got a new job in Germany and want to improve your German. A friend of yours went to a language school last year also to study German. Write a letter to your friend asking them about their experience. In your letter • give your friend your news • ask them if they would recommend the schoe PMPLw

Dear Rajitha, How have you been? I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing this letter to get some information about the German class which you went to after advanced level examinations. You know when I completed our Bachelor degree and I applied varies type for job vacancies specially game development. Well, one of the company at germany, interest with my resume and interviewed last monday. As a result, they really want to join the team, because I have much knowledge about the gaming industry and they are looking for overseas employees. However they required some fields to complete. Essentially, the German language. Because most of the employees do not understand english very well. After that, I remember you went to German class after school last year. So, I want some details about that institute and I want some recommendations about it. Because you have some valuable experience about the course and how long it takes to complete the course, and also is it suitable for beginners. As well as, I am searching for a job in Germany regarding your career. There are so many opportunities and please apply for them. If you have job in germany, then we both can go to the germany and enjoy it. I will send some links of job vacancies with regards to you. I hope to be hearing from you soon.

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Rajitha
,

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get
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some
 information about the German This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 which you went to after advanced level examinations.

You know when I completed our Bachelor degree and I applied varies type for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 vacancies specially
 game development. Well, one of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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monday
. As a result
, they really
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join
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because
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 they are looking for overseas employees. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
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some
 fields to complete. Essentially
, the German language. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 most of the employees do not understand Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well.

After that, I remember you went to German This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 after school last year. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I want This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about that institute and I want This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 recommendations about it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 valuable experience about the course and how long it takes to complete the course, and also
 is it suitable for beginners.

As well
 as, I am searching for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 in Germany regarding your career. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 opportunities and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 apply for them. If you have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 in Possible spelling mistake found.GermanyGermanGermansgermanegerm any
germany
, then we both can go to the Possible spelling mistake found.GermanyGermanGermansgermanegerm any
germany
 and enjoy it. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 links of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 vacancies Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
with regards to
 you.

I hope to The verb 'hearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be hearing
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 