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We are looking for stories for our new international magazine for teenagers. Your story must begin with this sentence: Sam and Henry read the letter and then climbed on their bikes and set off along the road.

We are looking for stories for our new international magazine for teenagers. Your story must begin with this sentence: Sam and Henry read the letter and then climbed on their bikes and set off along the road. mLpMq

BEST PARTY EVER Sam and Henry read the letter and then climbed on their bikes and set off along the road. The contents of the letter which had been delivered to Sam’s house that morning were slightly confusing and they knew it would be a long journey, but they couldn´t wait to get the answer. Not only the weather is bitter and misty but also the road is rough and muddy, they was cycling enthusiastically. At first, they arrive to bamboo forest. “ We're almost there. ” Sam cried cheerfully. Finally, they reach a small and mysterious house without seeing anyone at all. “ Are you scary? What shoud we do? ” asked Sam anxiously. “ Don’t worry! ” replied Henry confidently “ Here we are. ” As they went into the house, their classmates were waiting for them. “ Happy end-of-term. ” Everybody said excitedly. “ Congratulation! You are both the 100th guess” Our teacher, Mr. Jack informed. We got a prize luckily and joined in the best party ever. 163 words.

BEST PARTY EVER

Sam and Henry read the letter and then climbed on their bikes and set off along the road. The contents of the letter which had been delivered
 to Sam’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 that morning were slightly
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confusing and
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but
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couldn´t
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get
 the answer. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the weather is bitter and misty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 the road is rough and muddy, they Use third-person plural verb with 'they': "are", "were".arewere
was
 cycling enthusiastically
.

At first
, they arrive to bamboo forest.

“ We're almost there. ” Sam cried cheerfully
.

Finally
, they reach a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 and mysterious This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 without seeing anyone at all.

“ Are you scary? What Possible spelling mistake found.shouldshoutshroudSOUDshod
shoud
 we do? ” asked Sam anxiously
.

“ Don’t worry! ” replied Henry confidently
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“ 
Here we are. ”

As they went into the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, their classmates were waiting for them.

“ Happy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
-of-term. ” Everybody said excitedly
.

“ Congratulation! You are both the 100th guess” Our teacher, Mr. Jack informed. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a prize luckily and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 in the best party ever.

163 words. 