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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people K0KQw
I am Sandaruwani Sumanapala who is a frequent reader of your magazine. Therefore, I would prefer to add my own experience which you expect to contain the article which is called “The book that influenced me most”. It was a lovely amazing novel that consisted full of amusement that pertaining to the joyful childhood. The book had been excessively famous in 2000-2010 among the pupils and it was called “Alice in Wonderland”. Even though this story was a fairy tale, it gave an immense valuable impression on me where I could realize how we can move or face unexpected circumstances with a brave mind. As well as I strongly believe that, this novel would definitely offer a mixture of sensation for the school children and the teens if we can exchange the in-depth sense of the tale through your writings. Therefore, I hope you will consider the experience that I was extremely influenced. If anything to know further, feel free to contact me via 0719504778.
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Sandaruwani
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Sumanapala
who is a frequent reader of your magazine.
Therefore
, I would prefer to
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add
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
experience which you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to contain the article which
is called
“The book that influenced me most”.

It was a lovely amazing novel that consisted full of amusement that pertaining to the joyful childhood. The book had been
excessively
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
in 2000-2010 among the pupils and it
was called
“Alice in Wonderland”.

Even though
this story was a fairy tale, it gave an immense valuable impression on me where I could realize how we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
or face unexpected circumstances with a brave mind.
As well
as I
strongly
believe that, this novel would definitely offer a mixture of sensation for the school children and the teens if we can exchange the in-depth sense of the tale through your writings.

Therefore
, I hope you will consider the experience that I was
extremely
influenced. If anything to know
further
, feel free to contact me via 0719504778.
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IELTS letter A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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