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you wee absent form an important event held by the company you work

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I'm writing this letter to my family apologise for m my absence from the annual audit meeting held by yesterday. First of all, I again formally apologise for not able to comming very important meeting. I well known the importance of the meeting. Unfortunately, I cculd not attend this meeting due to y mother's sick. She was hospitalised because covid-19 symptoms can be seen from her. I really upset and scared for it. After hospitalized I can know she was felt in dengu fever. I was not able to come but my department all the documets, presetation diliver true my secatary. I sincerely apologize for absence and I think you trust my situation I hope my apology will be acepted stay safe.
I'm writing this letter to my family
apologise
for m my absence from the annual audit meeting held by yesterday.

First of all
, I again
formally
apologise
for not able to
comming
very
important
meeting. I well known the importance of the meeting.

Unfortunately, I
cculd
not attend this meeting due to y mother's sick. She was
hospitalised
because
covid-19
symptoms can be
seen
from her. I
really
upset and scared for it.
After
hospitalized
I can know she
was felt
in
dengu
fever. I was not able to
come
but
my department all the
documets
,
presetation
diliver
true my
secatary
.

I
sincerely
apologize
for absence and I
think
you trust my situation

I hope my apology will be
acepted


stay safe.
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IELTS letter you wee absent form an important event held by the company you work

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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