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write a letter to your friend talk about your two-week abroad holiday

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Dear Anne, How are you? I am so enjoyed when reading your letter about your vacation. I have just had a two-week holiday in Singapore with my friends too, and I would like to tell you about my trip. I had a special time with my friends there. We stayed in a lovely hotel close to almost famous tourist attractions. That city is extremely beautiful. We visited lots of interesting places such as Marina Bay Sands, Merlion Park, Botanic Garden, … I love the parks and green spaces there. I had a great time exploring the Gardens by the Bay. The place is really large and covered by greeneries. A special thing I encountered there was that they do not allow chewing gum arbitrarily while I am a gum addict. Fortunately, the delicious food here made me forget about it, especially street food. Singapore people are very friendly and hospitable. I could learn many things from this trip, particularly the necessity of preparing for the holiday in advance to fully enjoy the trip. That is all I want to tell you about my journey. I have to get back to work now. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes.
Dear Anne,

How are you? I am
so
enjoyed when reading your letter about your vacation. I have
just
had a two-week holiday in Singapore with my friends too, and I would like to
tell
you about my trip.

I
had a special time with my friends there. We stayed in a lovely hotel close to almost
famous
tourist attractions. That city is
extremely
beautiful
. We visited lots of interesting places such as Marina Bay Sands,
Merlion
Park, Botanic Garden, … I
love
the parks and green spaces there. I had a great time exploring the Gardens by the Bay. The place is
really
large and covered by
greeneries
.

A special thing I encountered there was that they do not
allow
chewing gum
arbitrarily
while I am a gum addict.
Fortunately
, the delicious food here made me forget about it,
especially
street food. Singapore
people
are
very
friendly and hospitable. I could learn
many
things from this trip,
particularly
the necessity of preparing for the holiday in advance to
fully
enjoy the trip.

That is
all I want to
tell
you about my journey. I
have to
get
back to work
now
. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend talk about your two-week abroad holiday

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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