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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Melanie C, and I am writing to inform you that I lost my wallet.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Melanie C, and I am writing to inform you that I lost my wallet. As far as I can recall, I took the train number 12 at Six Station and departed in Sevenplus Bay 11 at exactly nine in the morning today, September 5th. I was in a rush due to my sudden meeting at the office. It is a tiny, leather zipper wallet, color black moreover it has essential identification and bank cards including my driver's license, credit cards that I absolutely need since that is my only method of payment in my bills next week and most importantly the photo of my beloved grandparents which is extremely essential to me considering that it has a sentimental value. Please contact me if you have further updates I would appreciate if you could help me find my wallet as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you and I would be grateful for your assistance in this matter. Yours faithfully, Melanie C
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Melanie C, and I am writing to inform you that I lost my wallet. As far as I can recall, I took the train number 12 at Six Station and departed in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sevenplus
Bay 11 at exactly nine in the morning
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, September 5th. I was in a rush due to my sudden meeting at the office.

It is a tiny, leather zipper wallet, color black
moreover
it has essential identification and bank cards including my driver's license, credit cards that I
absolutely
need since
that is
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
method of payment in my bills
next
week and most
importantly
the photo of my beloved grandparents which is
extremely
essential to me considering that it has a sentimental value.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
contact me if you have
further
updates I would appreciate if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me find my wallet as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible. I look forward to hearing from you and I would be grateful for your assistance in this matter.

Yours
faithfully
, Melanie C
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Melanie C, and I am writing to inform you that I lost my wallet.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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