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You've bought a washing machine from your local shop recently. However, you were dissatisfied with the product. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager.

You've bought a washing machine from your local shop recently. However, you were dissatisfied with the product. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager. 7a1w3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about washing machine which I recently bought from your shop. After a week, things started to go wrong. After it had been being used for the first time. It worked properly. However, when I used for the second time it seemed to have some particular problems with it. The clothes still had a lot of soap in them when I have taken them out. Furthermore, When I tried to dry clothes, the machine cycle system did not work. In addition to this, the machine did not hit the water to the right temperature. I would like to replace well-functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of brand Otherwise, I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this matter. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your sincerely, Mrs Shukurdjonova
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about washing machine which I recently
bought
from your shop. After a week, things
started
to go
wrong
.

After it had been being
used
for the
first
time. It worked
properly
.
However
, when I
used
for the second time it seemed to have
some
particular problems with it. The clothes
still
had
a lot of
soap in them when I have taken them out.

Furthermore
, When I tried to dry clothes, the machine cycle system did not work.
In addition
to this, the machine did not hit the water to the right temperature.

I would like to replace well-functioning one. I
expect
to receive the same type of brand
Otherwise
, I will
be forced
to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this matter.

I
look forward to receiving a reply.

Your
sincerely
,

Mrs
Shukurdjonova
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IELTS letter You've bought a washing machine from your local shop recently. However, you were dissatisfied with the product. Write a complaint letter to the shop manager.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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