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You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen-friend and say when the best time to come is and why; what tourist attractions there are in your area; what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit.

You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen-friend and say when the best time to come is and why; what tourist attractions there are in your area; what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit. 3a3Nn
Hi Kate, It was great to get your letter. I'm writing to you to let you know when it would be better for you to come and what we are going to do. First of all, I have to finish studying. I hope that I’ll pass all of my exams with flying colors. After that I'll travel with my parents for two weeks at the end of June. So you may come in July. I'm sure we'll have a great time because I already have a lot of plans. We will visit all of our sightseeings. Furthermore, I’ll show you my favorite places and we’ll definitely sunbathe near river and enjoy time spent together. To make my story short, I hope you like my plan. The weather is sunny as usual and you may take your summer clothes. That’s all for now. I’d better go now as I have to do my homework. Looking forward to your answer and counting the days until I see you again. Much love, Ann
Hi Kate,

It was great to
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you know when it would be better for you to
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and what we are going to do.

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First of all
, I
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finish studying. I hope that I’ll pass all of my exams with flying colors. After that I'll travel with my parents for two weeks at the
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end
of June.
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you may
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in July.

I'm sure we'll have a great time
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because
I already have
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a lot of
plans. We will visit all of our
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sightseeings
.
Furthermore
, I’ll
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you my favorite
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places and
we’ll definitely sunbathe near river and enjoy time spent together.

To
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make
my story short, I hope you like my plan. The weather is sunny as usual and you may take your summer clothes. That’s all for
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now
. I’d better go
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as I
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have to
do my homework. Looking forward to your answer and counting the days until I
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you again.

Much
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,

Ann

IELTS letter You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen-friend and say when the best time to come is and why; what tourist attractions there are in your area; what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit.

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  American English
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169 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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