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You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen-friend and say when the best time to come is and why; what tourist attractions there are in your area; what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit.

You’ve received a letter from your English pen-friend in which he/she accepts your invitation to come and stay with you in Ukraine for a week. Write a letter to your pen-friend and say when the best time to come is and why; what tourist attractions there are in your area; what activities he/she could enjoy during the visit. 3a3Nn

Hi Kate, It was great to get your letter. I'm writing to you to let you know when it would be better for you to come and what we are going to do. First of all, I have to finish studying. I hope that I’ll pass all of my exams with flying colors. After that I'll travel with my parents for two weeks at the end of June. So you may come in July. I'm sure we'll have a great time because I already have a lot of plans. We will visit all of our sightseeings. Furthermore, I’ll show you my favorite places and we’ll definitely sunbathe near river and enjoy time spent together. To make my story short, I hope you like my plan. The weather is sunny as usual and you may take your summer clothes. That’s all for now. I’d better go now as I have to do my homework. Looking forward to your answer and counting the days until I see you again. Much love, Ann

Hi Kate,

It was great to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 your letter. I'm writing to you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know when it would be better for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and what we are going to do.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 finish studying. I hope that I’ll pass all of my exams with flying colors. After that I'll travel with my parents for two weeks at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of June. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 you may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 in July.

I'm sure we'll have a great time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I already have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 plans. We will visit all of our Possible spelling mistake found.sightseeingsight seeings
sightseeings
. Furthermore
, I’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you my favorite Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).places, and
places and
 we’ll definitely sunbathe near river and enjoy time spent together.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my story short, I hope you like my plan. The weather is sunny as usual and you may take your summer clothes. That’s all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. I’d better go This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 as I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do my homework. Looking forward to your answer and counting the days until I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you again.

Much This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

Ann