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Mr Brown had included details on a volunteer event on his website. On Saturday, Sunday, and Monday, the event will provide meals to the needy in X city's downtown.

Mr Brown had included details on a volunteer event on his website. On Saturday, Sunday, and Monday, the event will provide meals to the needy in X city's downtown. 85nqr
I would like to participate in your program as a meal server for the poor in X city's dosntown. I learned about this occurrence from an advertisement you posted on your website. The plan is just what I am looking for, and I would be honored to be a part of your case. Iwould like to apply for this volunteer event for a variety of reasons: First, I have done volunteer work similar to this before and I am familiar with the process. Second, I am very familiar with the downtown area of X city and would have no trouble locating the locations in that area. Finally, I can drive a car, which will allow us to serve more quickly. But there is one thing I'd like to ask you. Is it a problem if I only attend the event on Sunday and Monday? Even, if it is possible, can I contact other volunteers to discuss the prose with them? Thank you so much for your assistance. I eagerly await your answer. Sincerely Arefeh J
I would like to participate in your program as a meal server for the poor in X city's
dosntown
.

I learned about this occurrence from an advertisement you posted on your website.

The plan is
just
what I am looking for, and I would
be honored
to be a part of your case.

Iwould
like to apply for this volunteer
event
for a variety of reasons:

First
, I have done volunteer work similar to this
before and
I am familiar with the process.

Second, I am
very
familiar with the downtown area of X city and would have no trouble locating the locations in that area.

Finally
, I can drive a car, which will
allow
us to serve more
quickly
.

But
there is one thing I'd like to ask you.

Is it a problem if I
only
attend the
event
on Sunday and Monday? Even, if it is possible, can I contact other volunteers to discuss the prose with them?

Thank you
so
much for your assistance. I
eagerly
await your answer.

Sincerely


Arefeh
J
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IELTS letter Mr Brown had included details on a volunteer event on his website. On Saturday, Sunday, and Monday, the event will provide meals to the needy in X city's downtown.

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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