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Mr Brown had included details on a volunteer event on his website. On Saturday, Sunday, and Monday, the event will provide meals to the needy in X city's downtown.

Mr Brown had included details on a volunteer event on his website. On Saturday, Sunday, and Monday, the event will provide meals to the needy in X city's downtown. 85nqr

I would like to participate in your program as a meal server for the poor in X city's dosntown. I learned about this occurrence from an advertisement you posted on your website. The plan is just what I am looking for, and I would be honored to be a part of your case. Iwould like to apply for this volunteer event for a variety of reasons: First, I have done volunteer work similar to this before and I am familiar with the process. Second, I am very familiar with the downtown area of X city and would have no trouble locating the locations in that area. Finally, I can drive a car, which will allow us to serve more quickly. But there is one thing I'd like to ask you. Is it a problem if I only attend the event on Sunday and Monday? Even, if it is possible, can I contact other volunteers to discuss the prose with them? Thank you so much for your assistance. I eagerly await your answer. Sincerely Arefeh J

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dosntown
.

I learned about this occurrence from an advertisement you posted on your website.

The plan is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 what I am looking for, and I would be honored
 to be a part of your case.

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 like to apply for this volunteer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 for a variety of reasons:

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 I am familiar with the process.

Second, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 familiar with the downtown area of X city and would have no trouble locating the locations in that area.

Finally
, I can drive a car, which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 us to serve more quickly
.

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But
 there is one thing I'd like to ask you.

Is it a problem if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 attend the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 on Sunday and Monday? Even, if it is possible, can I contact other volunteers to discuss the prose with them?

Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for your assistance. I eagerly
 await your answer.

Sincerely


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