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You said you would attend a friend's dinner party but you did not go.

You said you would attend a friend's dinner party but you did not go. AjKM1
Dear Mr. John, My sincere apologies for last night's disturbance caused by us. I can totally understand how hard it is for anyone to bear such noise during midnight hours. I moved to this house merely last weekend and invited my relatives and friends for a housewarming ceremony yesterday evening and perhaps the enjoyment with drinks served made us late to realize that the audio system output has been on the higher side. This morning, we have already taken action by returning all speakers and audio systems and reassure such an event would not happen again. Please accept my sincerest apology and consider this as my personal invitation to you and your family, kindly visit us anytime and let us strengthen our relationship. Regards, Terence
Dear Mr. John,

My sincere apologies for last night's disturbance caused by us. I can
totally
understand how
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hard
it is for anyone to bear such noise during midnight hours. I
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moved
to this
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house
merely
last weekend and invited my relatives and friends for a housewarming ceremony yesterday evening and perhaps the enjoyment with drinks served made us late to realize that the audio system output has been on the higher side.

This morning, we have already taken action by returning all speakers and audio systems and reassure such an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
would not happen again.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my sincerest apology and consider this as my personal invitation to you and your family, kindly visit us anytime and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
us strengthen our relationship.

Regards,

Terence
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IELTS letter You said you would attend a friend's dinner party but you did not go.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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