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You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager.

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Dear Mr. Wilson, I am writing to apologize for not being at the budget meeting yesterday afternoon. I know these meetings are extremely critical when we are making plans for the final quarter. The reason for my absence is that my meeting with the Chief Financial Officer ran an hour late. As you know, Mr. Wallace’s office is on the 34th floor of the Finley building and by the time we finished, it was already a quarter past three. I have followed up to make sure I have all the budget information. Alice is going to provide me with the forecast minutes of the meeting. Again, I am sincerely sorry that I was unable to attend and hope you understand the circumstances that led to my absence. Yours truly, John Watson

Dear Mr. Wilson,

I am writing to apologize for not being at the budget meeting yesterday afternoon. I know these meetings are extremely
 critical when we are making plans for the final quarter.

The reason for my absence is that my meeting with the Chief Financial Officer ran an hour late. As you know, Mr. Wallace’s office is on the 34th floor of the Finley building and by the time we finished, it was already a quarter past three.

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make
 sure I have all the budget information. Alice is going to provide me with the forecast minutes of the meeting.

Again, I am sincerely
 sorry that I was unable to attend and hope you understand the circumstances that led to my absence.

Yours truly
,

John Watson

IELTS letter You missed an important meeting at work. Write a letter to your manager.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

130 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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