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you recently rented a car for business trip. when you received the bill, there were some charges that did not seem correct. Write a letter to the rental company and provide the dates of contract and purpose of the trip. Describe the confusion with the bill. Say what do you want to do the company

you recently rented a car for business trip. when you received the bill, there were some charges that did not seem correct. Write a letter to the rental company and provide the dates of contract and purpose of the trip. Describe the confusion with the bill. Say what do you want to do the company m1GBA
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my extreme disappointment regarding the hiring of a car from your company. My name is James Smith. Last week, I had a business meeting with my clients in Canada. For that purpose, I hired a Swift car from your company for three days. The organisation issued an agreement started from 21st April to 23rd April. The overall charges of the trip, including the driver, was $500 for three days. As far as I am concerned with the generated bill, I was liable to pay the charges mentioned in the rental contract. To my surprise, the bill which I received is of $650. Miscaellenous expenses were also added in it. Although I had cleared all the payment of my trip on the same day of my trip. Unfortunately, it is still showing pending status of my trip. I would like you to check the issued bill on my account, which is linked with your company. Kindly send me updated invoice too, which includes other expenditures raised during trip. Your immediate attention to this matter is needed. Yours faithfully, James Smith
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my extreme disappointment regarding the hiring of a car from your
company
.

My name is James Smith. Last week, I had a business meeting with my clients in Canada. For that purpose, I hired a Swift car from your
company
for three days. The
organisation
issued an agreement
started
from 21st April to 23rd April. The
overall
charges of the trip, including the driver, was $500 for three days.

As far as I
am concerned
with the generated bill, I was liable to pay the charges mentioned in the rental contract. To my surprise, the bill which I received is of $650.
Miscaellenous
expenses were
also
added
in it.
Although
I had cleared all the payment of my trip on the same day of my trip. Unfortunately, it is
still
showing pending status of my trip.

I would like you to
check
the issued bill on my account, which
is linked
with your
company
. Kindly
send
me updated invoice too, which includes other expenditures raised during trip.

Your immediate attention to this matter
is needed
.

Yours
faithfully
,

James Smith
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IELTS letter you recently rented a car for business trip. when you received the bill, there were some charges that did not seem correct. Write a letter to the rental company and provide the dates of contract and purpose of the trip. Describe the confusion with the bill. Say what do you want to do the company

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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