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letter to hotel manager for the lost jacket

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Dear Manager, I am writing about my jacket which i left at your restaurant yesterday. It is a winter jacket. I would like you to search my jacket in your restaurant. Last night, I have visited your restaurant around 9PM for dinner. I remember hanging my jacket around the chair. However, I received an emergency call in middle of dinner, as a result I had to rush back immediately, and missed to pick it up. It is light winter jacket. The color is green with brown trims on collar. It is made up of wool lined with silk. You can also find my initials stitched on the left pocket. I request you to look for the jacket. Please enquire with your staff or check it in lost and found, if any customer has reported. If you found it, you can reach out to me on my work number. I will come to the restaurant and pick it up immediately once i hear from you. Thank you in advance for your help. Sincerely,
Dear Manager,

I am writing about my
jacket
which
i
left
at your restaurant yesterday. It is a winter
jacket
. I would like you to search my
jacket
in your restaurant.

Last night, I have visited your restaurant around 9PM for dinner. I remember hanging my
jacket
around the chair.
However
, I received an emergency call in middle of dinner,
as a result
I had to rush back immediately, and
missed to pick
it up.

It is light winter
jacket
. The color is green with brown trims on collar. It
is made
up of wool lined with silk. You can
also
find my initials stitched on the
left
pocket.

I request you to look for the
jacket
.
Please
enquire
with your staff or
check
it in lost and found, if any customer has reported. If you found it, you can reach out to me on my work number. I will
come
to the restaurant and pick it up immediately once
i
hear from you.

Thank you in advance for your
help
.

Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter letter to hotel manager for the lost jacket

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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