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your teacher has found a new penfriend for you. write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

your teacher has found a new penfriend for you. write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests. dodDr
Dear Zack, I hope you are doing great. My English teacher suggested your name as you were looking for a penfriend like me. I thought of introducing myself. My name is Amanda, I am 25-year-old. I live in the small town of Woodstock with my family. I am currently working as a High school teacher. I teach science and math to 6th-grade students. I love teaching kids, love biking, and spending time with my family. During my free time, I enjoy watching movies, going out with my friends and sometimes I go hiking or a long walk if the weather permits. I go for my music lessons at least once a month. I play piano and drums. I am planning to join a music band in our city soon. Enough about myself, tell me about you? What are the things that you enjoy, your interests also your favorite pastime? I would love to hear back from you. Looking forward to the revert. Take care, Best regards, Amanda Wilson
Dear Zack,

I hope you are doing great. My English teacher suggested your name as you were looking for a penfriend like me. I
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thought
of introducing myself.

My name is Amanda, I am 25-year-
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old
. I
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live
in the
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small
town of Woodstock with my family. I am
currently
working as a High school teacher.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
teach science and math to 6th-grade students.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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love
teaching kids,
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love
biking, and spending time with my family.

During my free time, I enjoy watching movies, going out with my friends and
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sometimes
I go hiking or a long walk if the weather permits. I go for my music lessons at least once a month. I play piano and drums.
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I
am planning to
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join
a music band in our city
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soon
.

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Enough
about myself,
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tell
me about you? What are the things that you enjoy, your interests
also
your favorite pastime? I would
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love
to hear back from you.

Looking forward to the revert.

Take care,

Best regards,

Amanda Wilson
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IELTS letter your teacher has found a new penfriend for you. write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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