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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the accommodation you offer to someone going to spend a year in London. I am a journalist, and due to my job relocation, I want to discover more about this city and the most economical situation I can have through this transformation. Let me explain my situation. As I have a cousin living in London, I am looking for a room with a bed, bathroom, kitchen, and other facilities that are not necessarily required. I won't spend all days in the room, but I may just come by to visit one day per week for change or rest. I will arrive on January first around 5: 00 pm, and I will need a taxi to the room. I would be most grateful if you could reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Anna Dabinga
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire about the accommodation you offer to someone going to spend a year in London. I am a journalist, and due to my job relocation, I want to discover more about this city and the most
Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?
economical
situation I can have through this transformation.

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Let
me
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my situation. As I have a cousin living in London, I am looking for a room with a bed, bathroom, kitchen, and other facilities that are not
necessarily
required. I won't spend all days in the room,
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but
I may
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just
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come
by to visit one day per week for
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change
or rest.

I will arrive on January
first
around 5: 00 pm, and I will need a taxi to the room.

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I
would be most grateful if you could reply as
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as possible.

Yours
faithfully


Anna
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Dabinga

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6 paragraphs
143 words
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